good chapter.

Wow! Once again, I love the background info. One little thing- are you doing just wizards or muggles as well, because the Riddles die as well as Frank Bryce, their gardener. Just in case you want more people to write about :)

interesting to think of quirrel on a farm!

Excellent as usual! There were a few inconsistencies between the book and your story, but it was close enough. I liked the background information about Quirrel- that was neat!

Yeah, I think it was a good idea to do Voldemort now as well as later. Great as usual!

Nice.
The evil is evident and well-written.
I like it.

really interesting idea. hope you will do more!!

I'd suggest keeping The Fallen as the title. It suits the story.
This chapter is very well done.
Poor Lily and James! :(

Very nice! You fit so many emotions and so much information into a neat little package. I can't wait for the next one!

Good chapter and I suggest u to left the story title ''The Fallen''

Aw this sounds really sad but also really good!
I like both names but I think Last Moments fits better for HP
Please write more soon!

This is good so far.
Keep going!

Well, I love the story. Keep writing and update asap.!