DANG! i really thought she was going to tell him awwwwwwwwwwww! But anyway loved your story bye)

AW!

that is so typical of hinata and well lots of others!

LOVE IT!

this is cute! GO, HINATA! YOU CAN DO IT, GIRL!

it really works! even if it's a little sad in the end.

DarkC

I nice and sweet fluffy snack.
Good work on your characterization.

Thank you so much for using correct grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. Love you for that.

Awesome! No other words to describe it.

Darn. I was hoping she would tell him and then kiss him. Cute story though.