 stella8h8chang 2008-10-30 . chapter 1Font of Youth spell! You're a genius! I love the little touches, from the bit about the Carrows to "S*, take rhymes!", to the awesome "hangover that felt like it had been going for over a century".
Just a few things - I would've liked to see them talking a little more like teenagers, apart from Voldie who's in a class of his own. Like, "the party’s structured" sounded a little too formal, especially when put with "Sev". Also, it was kind of funny how you switched from calling Peter "Pettigrew" to "Wormtail"?
But I loved the time travel ;) |