i liked it, hope you will continue it again soon!!

This is a pretty good story so far, but I think that Albert just needs to know the truth. Keep it up!

Good writing. But where's the Albert / Monte Cristo father-son bonding?

Glad to hear you're feeling better! Yay, for the update!

Nice update and good use of a flashback. Maybe this flashback will help him in the story later when it comes to actually forgiving his father and putting the memories of Fernand at rest.

I have been waiting for years for someone to write something like this! I can't wait to see more chapters!

Ouch, that sounds pretty painful. Hope you're feeling better soon. :-)

This story has great potential. I hope you will continue.

I have always wondered about how Edmund's and Albert's relationship progressed. I look forward to your upcoming chapters.

Boy, is Albert mad! I just hope Edmond will be able to talk to him soon and both Mercedes and Edmond will help their son to not be so bitter.

Loved this story! Can't wait to read more!

please continue.

Hi! I really like your fic so far! I always thought the ending of the movie was a bit rushed and I'm really looking forward to see what's going to happen now! keep up the good work! :)

This is a good story. Please write more. I always thought something should have been done between the duel and when they cut to the island three months later. Albert would have had to get used to another father. He wouldn't have gone running for a hug from Edmond.