 The One Called Demetra 2009-09-22 . chapter 6Oh...I loved the Book Theif. This was lovely, very beautiful and criminally underappreciated. |
 shirosunday ('coz I'm lazy ^^) 2009-05-16 . chapter 13 I liked Light's the best! Little, hyperactive Light Yagami running around the house like in 'Home Alone' certainly seems very funny in my head LOL. Misa has got to be the second fave, since it's so angsty in the end. Everyone else's was okay, but somehow those two stand out. Well, to me , at least. Hmm... I wonder what the three wonder boys (M, N and M) would be allergic to?
~Sunday
P.S. I read this in LJ too. FF messed up your format, love. :( |
 Sonar 2009-03-06 . chapter 8Great and right to the point. |
 shirosunday 2008-11-27 . chapter 7(laughs) Light and his inner voices! Always love that! And he's a cuddly little four-year old! Hahaha... This one is just too cute ^_^ |
 Kit-Pocket 2008-11-26 . chapter 7Oh dear. ._. Does Light realize L could be in serious trouble now?
This sounds like it will be awesome. XD Looking forward to more! |
 shirosunday 2008-11-21 . chapter 6The Book Thief! I adored that book! Death was such a sarcastically funny character. I'm glad you did a chapter of it for this. I loved Liesel! Oh, and I cried for Rudy! (ahem.) Anyway, I digress...
I liked how it was written. There's a certain detachment to it that really does remind me of Death in Zusak's book. I would've liked a bit more detail and emotion, but I'm not sure if it would work since we are just talking about a few seconds of observation. However, Death mentions color, but there wasn't any in the times he saw Light. I remember in the book that there was red, white and black when he saw Liesel. If you chose to rewrite it, maybe you could use that too and it would all culminate during the final scene, since Light did have all those colors when he laid on the steps. Aside from that, I'm glad you made this chapter. I really am! XD
~Sunday |
 Kit-Pocket 2008-10-30 . chapter 5Very nice! It's very interesting to see them in other times. I like it. ^^ Good job! |
 shirosunday 2008-10-22 . chapter 4O_O Actually... I DID think of it as a serious plot in the beginning when we were just discussing L, Light and BB; but when you mentioned the Whammy Boys I just couldn't help it! HAHAHAHA “Tan tara-ra-ra-ra! ” indeed!
This was hilarious! Whammy Boys to the rescue... HAHAHA oh Lord, I still can't stop smiling. My frickin' cheeks are hurting! Nice touch with Sayu! Anyhoo, your range is getting quite diverse! Great job Gabi!
You have GOT to do another of this universe with our version of L! Pwetty pwease? (0u0) And hello... where are the reviews this girl deserves?! |
 shirosunday 2008-10-22 . chapter 3O_O I. Loved. This! Gabi, you should really write more stuff like this. It was really fun! It was inspired by THAT scene? Lol! I'm so glad! L and Light arguing is always amusing, but adding food to the mix (and a grandfatherly Watari) is just absolutely wonderful. oh and :squint: I see shounen-ai! teehee! well kind of ^_^
~Sunday
P.S. Havisham half-done! Email it soon! XD |
 shirosunday 2008-10-21 . chapter 2You know, for some reason, I imagine this in fish bowl perspective. There's this chapter title in the manga where Ryuk's eye reflects Light, and somehow this was how I saw this. I think it was when Ryuk just told Light of the Eyes Deal. Anyhoo, except in this case, its L who's distorted in B's eyes. Ah well... This was interesting. Hurray for Halloween/L's birthday! ... and death anniversary. o_o
~Sunday |
 shirosunday 2008-10-15 . chapter 1Hellos! I liked really liked this Gabi! I imagine tiny!Light going around in his pyjama's and its so cute! makes me want to uncharacterisitcally glomp him; which just makes the end part all the more tragic. I really wonder how it would feel to have such a brilliant son and have him end up as Kira. Poor Soichiro has to shoulder all the knowledge himself too.
I look forward to this 50-chapter series! XD 'til the next one then! |
 Kit-Pocket 2008-10-15 . chapter 1That was really good! ^^ Good thing I already heard the spoiler that Soichiro was still alive, or else I'd be really mad at you. Heh heh. XD Though it wouldn't be your fault, it would be mine... anyway...
I really, really liked it. It's always interesting to look into the character's childhoods. I'm interested to see what else you write for this series. ^^ |