Aww... This is beautiful.. I really like Zack since I've played crisis core but I cannot let go of the Aeris and Cloud pairing.. I love these stories and you mentioned Zack here!
I really liked this one and the way you write is just brilliant :)

Aw, I can't stop smiling. I love your C/A stories. This was undeniably cute. Character's on parr as usual. Great detail, great prose, just great everything! I need to write another clerith one-shot or something...I did one not too long ago, but now I feel like I should do another one...where do you find these clerith contests/challenges anyway? I'd love to enter one...

Anyway, wonderful story!

Wow! I love it! Their innocence makes them a cute couple. (^3^)

Ahh... I'm suck a sucker for a good Clorith. It will always be my weakness no matter what. I LOVED this.

Aw! This was so sweet! And very well written. That's rare in the world of fanfiction. I applaud you!

very pretty. I'm glad a writer went into the "sky" subject with Aerith.It was sweet.
I think you did it in a good way :3