I'm enjoying this story ... yo tambien me desepcione realizing that the series had no FINDINGS, especially tenuendo a villain as terrifying as Taurus Bulba, I know I risk death Darkwing see in this fic, but there are only two heroes obciones to be retire or die ... I hope to triumph in the end.

This is still a great story. You have tremendous skills as a writer, my only suggestion would be to find a beta reader to help you with your grammar. I'm not trying to sound mean, I'm trying to give you advice author to author. I, myself, use a beta reader. You tend to have a lot of run-on sentences and confuse variations of words in certain scenarios, and that can be distracting to the reader.

But I DO really enjoy reading this story, and am happy to continue to do so. For the most part you do a good job of characterization, and now that DW is aware that Bulba IS behind things, I'm even more interested to see what happens. :)

Still intriguing so far! Some grammar mistakes, but they hardly take away from your story! I'm interested to see what Bulba has in store, after using and then disposing of the lesser villains. I LOVE that you gave the Eggmen names, too! XD

"Who the Hell is Dr. Furby and why is he stealing my fish?"


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That was histerical!

when are you going to put chapter 13 up because i want to know whats going to happen next and where did darkwing and gosalyn go on vaction and i wonder what taurus bulba wants with gosalyn and darkwing and this story is geting to be good keep up the good work

Glad you updated; this is so cool!

Great chapter; I loved when Gander and company appeared from nowhere.

Drake and Gos' scenes were good too. He has to realize that Gos has already 2 males in her life that mean the world to her; Drake himself, her dad, and Launchpad, who's like a big brother-cool uncle; now, she needs another important male figure, one who will be her life-partner, and Honker, her best friend, is a good way to start.

Keep the good writing.

Wonderful chapter here I like the Chameleon trying to braging for her life with the fowl agents, the collapse of fowl and exllcent exchange between Drake and Gosyln

I love this story with all of my heart! When I was little i was a HUGE Darkwing Duck fan, and of course I still am! When I saw this story i thought it was too good to be true; and it is! You have the characters down to the T, and the plot is amazing. You keep readers guessing but not to the point where its confusing. Gosh gosh gosh I love it so much! I hope you write more because this story is simply georgeous.

Impresstive chapter here , exllcent diglou and fight scens love the scene between Drake and Hooter saying he DW secert idnety also what a great twist

Wow such a twist to a great story. I'm glad you updated.

The Chameleon! Bulba really thought about everything.

Darkwing's tactic was so... unpredictable and brilliant; poor Honker, of course, but it was the best DW could do at the time, and it saved everyone.

Keep the good writing.

Exllcent chapter here plenty of action and drama , wonder what has happened to Bulba and if Darkwing can save both honker and gos, through knowing Honker he probely find a way out.

good chapter I really liked the way you wrote taurus bulba.

Great chapter this time, and better editing. It was a lot easier to follow and the characterizations were done very well! I loved the puns you threw in for Bug Master, and you wrote the action scenes very well. Great job!

I really enjoy your idea of incorporating minor villains into this story, and your plot sounds like it's going to be great. However, your poor grammar takes away from the story for the reader, at least for me. I'd advise asking someone to beta-read before you post or have someone edit. It's hard to follow at times because the tenses change or the wrong spelling or word is used.

Other than that, it's a very enjoyable read and you're fairly good about staying in character. :)