 Fortune Glyph 2008-10-28 . chapter 5Yay! Happy ending! Sorry this review is late. Had problems last night because of a power surge on Sunday. Great story Shelby! Happy Halloween! |
 Whiteling 2008-10-27 . chapter 5*Sigh* I love happy endings. Nice one Shell. ;) |
 DarkMagicianmon 2008-10-27 . chapter 5That was a cool treat |
 the Medal Skull Reaper 2008-10-25 . chapter 4 Well, This is getting Terrifing, (note* I only Review stories made by the "Author Fighters", like you for size) and please, update dis story, and I wil be a happy reaper, and like I said before, UPDATE SOON. |
 X-Teen, the Teenaged Mutant 2008-10-23 . chapter 4 hey my fellow reptile, have you ever thought of making another "Ben and the Toon Kids" story, based off the "Alvin and the Chipmunks" stories, and could you also do a parody of the Live-action movie, and could you add Xavier to your profile, it's so we can know who the heck he is, and please, update soon. |
 Lina Ben 2008-10-23 . chapter 4Geat so far. Keep writing. |
 Black Falcon 2008-10-22 . chapter 4 hey Dragongirl, how about having Hinata, Dani, and Erin appear in the next chapter, I mean, come on, the Chipettes didn;t appear in that episode, so why not have them in the end, and could you also make a "Ben and the Toon Kids" story when they first meet the "Toon-Girls" (Dani, Erin, and Hinata), and as for there dog (in one Ben and the Toon Kids story), how about having a Pikachu Named (any electric-themed name you want), and also if you do the "Toon-girls" story, please do this after this one, or finish another story of yours, like say, Bencules, then you won't have to worry about it anymore. And if you do get Dani, Erin and Hianta in the story, how about having Dani as her Phantom self, Erin in her Hero form, and Hinata as a Marvel Villianess or Heroine(example: Enchantress, Dagger, or Black Cat, Ect.), any one you want, and also have these kids involved: Timmy Turner, Pan (dragonball GT), Tai, Matt, TK and Kari (all form Digimon), Jimmy, Hannah, Bert, Daryl, and Kattie (Scary Godmother), the Animaniacs, and any other kids you want. and please, update soon. |
 Dragonboy 2008-10-22 . chapter 4 hey, in the next chapter, how about you let Terrence and four other members (Paul, Vicky, Chad Dixion (KND), and Toad (X-men Evalotion)) be the ones dressed as Danny and hid friends, and could you have Naruto have better insults then Theodor had in the original. and please, update soon. |
 DestinyZX 2008-10-22 . chapter 4Looks like Danny is not such a bad guy but yet... I have a bad feeling that Terrance and his friends are gonna cause trouble. Great work. |
 DestinyZX 2008-10-22 . chapter 3I thought Naruto was a goner. But now Ben feels down that he isn't monster material. I got a bad feeling though... very bad. |
 DestinyZX 2008-10-22 . chapter 2Oh no, Naruto is in trouble. I've got a bad feeling about this. It's a good chapter and it is making me go bump in the night. |
 Fortune Glyph 2008-10-22 . chapter 4Uh oh. Poor Ben. Can't wait for more! Update soon! |
 Whiteling 2008-10-22 . chapter 4I really don't see what's so good about the Monster club; nasty creeps that think it's cool to be cruel, that's only one step to heartless adults then to Evil.
Ben's really making a fuss about it over one lousy jacket to impress girls? Pathetic!
But he better shape up. |
 DarkMagicianmon 2008-10-22 . chapter 4Ben better make this choice count otherwise he's doomend Naruto's pals |
 Black Falcon 2008-10-21 . chapter 3 hey Dragon-girl, when are you going to update, I mean, come on, October is almost finished, and me and my buddies can't wait for november for you to be done, so please update soon, I'm begging here. |
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