I want to know what happens next, please continue! But the thing I don't like is how there's song lyrics right in the story, breaking the parts up like that. I know what you're trying to do, but it annoys me. Songfic is good, but songs in the fic isn't my favorite, even though practically every 10/Rose songfic has the lyrics.

I thought that this story was interesting.

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Um, maybe one of the best stories ever? Formatting isn't the best, it's not that bad though.

Argh! That song annoys me. Doctor Who songfics annoy me. Please write more DW stories with no pop songs in them.

God Damn you! how long ago was it that you wrote this story. You must write a sequel. I will hunt you down and tie your hands to the keyboard if you dont write more. Better than that(since i cant guarrentee that you will moveyour hands any)I will hhunt you donw steal your writes to this story away from you and write more on it myself. I will dont it. I AM THE HOMICIDAL PLOT BUNNY FROM ALL THE NEATHERREGIONS!

Aww...sugarangst. Sequel, or death!

ah that was cute. that was really a biblical change in atitude. i just read the real slim snapey and then this. my goodness.

Wow. Absolute wow! That was definitely a surprise and a lot of conflicting emotions. This definitely demands a sequel or even a prequel.

Keep up the brilliant work!

Very Good. But If Tegan's little girl is the Doctor's child...She'll be running Earth in few years!

great story but you can't call that an end. finsh it off with a chapter two.

Great story!