Pshh, who the hell cares about Cash! GO GWEVIN!

This has basically been the most amazing Gwevin fic I've ever read. Seriously. I loved it. It just seemed so realistic, too, I mean you even got Kevin's 16-year-old self saying the exact things he would say in the show. (hahahaha lame-o's.) Anyway, I love all your stuff, but this has been brilliant! Keep writing Gwevin! :)

This was excellent. I loved the continuing theme of 'being a hero'. And the end, with Cash asking and his 'change', and the last six lines. A perfect memorable end for this story.

CHARMING. JUST CHARMING MA CHERE. YOUR WRITEING HAS BEWITCHED ME ONCE MORE. LOVE AND KINDNESS KYLE.,PS,KEEP UP THE SUPERB WORK.

not matter how many times i read this... i just get enough of it. i love it. you're pro.

omg awesome! EPIC!

wow. I just recently got into the Ben 10: Alien Force show, and this is the first fanfic I've read about it. It going to be hard to read other stories after this one. It was that good. :)
I'm not going to go into detail about this review since I don't have time, so I'm just going to say that I love your writing style and the plot was amazing. Keep up the good work :D

Holy crap...
This story was extremly intense!
I loved every single second I spent reading this, and even though I love Kevin and resent anyone who refers to villian ways, I still think this is like one of the best stories up here!
The length of each chapter was good and long, each sentence kept me interested, and it put a whole new light on Cash and his personality.
Your right when you say that bullies characterizations are harder to put together.
The one thing I didn't get was why would the plumbers be wasting their time hunting down a stalker, even if she was stalking someone important and was kind of a threat to him. I would think that they might tip him off about her and let him handle it himself--he did have the resources...
Other than that, it was really, really good!
Keep writing!

Poor Cash.
I feel sorry for him...even though he did get to have Gwen call him her hero. Still...he would have taken care of her no matter what...her and Kevin's kid. I wonder how they would have explained it if the kid had powers later in life?
Ah well.
Great Cash development...he doesn't have enough fics ^_^

Wow.
That was awesome.
It must have been hard for Cash to sit there and listen...even if it was dangerously sexy for us Gwevin fans.
I believe that he wouldn't tell.
He'd do anything to be Gwen's hero XD

Aww...love it!
The end was so sweet...and I like that you had Cash actually trying to get Gwen to come with him..even if Kevin was with her.

An extremely well-written tale, and very enjoyable! The only thing that didn't quite ring true for me was that Gwen would operate so independently from Ben; I would've thought they would work together much more. Aside from that, an excellent tale! Please keep up the good work. Oh, and I especially liked the inclusion of Cooper. He seems to be too often forgotten in Ben 10 fics, and your description of his personality as basically sweet but conniving was right on target with his depiction in the series. Was it because of stories from Ben that Cooper was hostile toward Cash?

OK NO OFFENCE BUT I HATED IT... YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA