THERE IS NO BACK STORY NO EXPLANATIONS NOTHING

Love the idea for this story but you kinda jump around a lot which makes it hard to follow. And the whole Dr. Westlake/Gabrielle/the Wing made no sense to me. Is that another crossover?

Your idea is sound, but your prose is strickingly repetitive. Such as: "A blanket of chill surrounded him like a blanket." This fic would improve dramatically with a beta reader to help you catch incidences where you repeat words and phrases in close proxmity to each other. Or you could try rereading these early chapters yourself. I find that a little time away from your own prose can help you see it with new eyes.

Very interesting story, I hope to read more soon.

When will you tell why exactly the police are after Xander?

I found 2 type-os in this chapter 1: "John looked at his father" "John" should be "Sam"

2: "b lade"-get rid of the space between "b" and "lade"

Good.. More..more..please hurry up! )

Very interesting so far. I do like the idea of Xander working with the Winchesters.

Good start, more soon

Interesting start to the fic, I hope that you'll post more soon.

Any idea when you might update "Lost and Found"?