|Reviews for Only Human|
| falseproffitt 12/14/11 . chapter 11
THERE IS NO BACK STORY NO EXPLANATIONS NOTHING
| Aria DeLoncray 1/9/09 . chapter 9
Love the idea for this story but you kinda jump around a lot which makes it hard to follow. And the whole Dr. Westlake/Gabrielle/the Wing made no sense to me. Is that another crossover?
| ashez2ashes 12/25/08 . chapter 1
Your idea is sound, but your prose is strickingly repetitive. Such as: "A blanket of chill surrounded him like a blanket." This fic would improve dramatically with a beta reader to help you catch incidences where you repeat words and phrases in close proxmity to each other. Or you could try rereading these early chapters yourself. I find that a little time away from your own prose can help you see it with new eyes.
| Sean Malloy-1 12/23/08 . chapter 7
Very interesting story, I hope to read more soon.
When will you tell why exactly the police are after Xander?
| Sean Malloy-1 12/23/08 . chapter 2
I found 2 type-os in this chapter 1: "John looked at his father" "John" should be "Sam"
2: "b lade"-get rid of the space between "b" and "lade"
| cursedgirl 12/6/08 . chapter 5
Good.. More..more..please hurry up! )
| kkj 10/30/08 . chapter 3
Very interesting so far. I do like the idea of Xander working with the Winchesters.
| vampyfreak 10/18/08 . chapter 1
Good start, more soon
| Sean Malloy-1 10/15/08 . chapter 1
Interesting start to the fic, I hope that you'll post more soon.
Any idea when you might update "Lost and Found"?