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Reviews for: What do I really feel
SasuSaku'sLittleGrl
2009-04-13 . chapter 4
who did she see? who the hell did she see?!
Mistyjet
2009-01-01 . chapter 4
great chapter! update soon!!
melody-berry2
2008-12-31 . chapter 4
ah cliffy lol
XP
Mistyjet
2008-11-30 . chapter 3
Great chapter! update soon!
Mistyjet
2008-11-16 . chapter 2
great chapter! update soon!
Knight-Itachi-Sparkling-Senshi
2008-10-16 . chapter 1
This is really good so far (poor Sasuke-Kun!) but...
You may need to put more details in there, instead of just jumping from scene to scene. The classes are really short, and not much seems to be happening...
Maybe a bit more detail WOULD help... :)
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