that was real cute at that last chapter
"He's pretty amazing isn't he" cosmo asked her.
"He sure is honey. our special little guy"
i will admit that i almost cried reading those two sentences. to be honest though, i think you could've had a much awesomer story if you had used anti-fairies instead of pixies. but over all, won of the best FOP stories on fanfic
Keep it up, dude

I have just read this fic, I think it is really good. I have been a big fan of FOP during it's entire run, but I do prefer the eppies of the first three and a half seasons to later seasons. Not that there haven't been some good eppies in later seasons, and I think that Poof has been a good addition to the series, but I think that in earlier eppies, Cosmo was more considerate of Wanda and wasn't making jokes about her weight, flirting with other females, etc. Also, Cosmo wasn't a complete idiot like he is in later eppies. He occasionally showed flashes of ingenuity.

Also, Wanda in the earlier seasons wasn't so overly critical of her charges (Timmy and Cosmo), and enjoyed having fun as much as her husband and godchild do.

Some of the new eppies are quite funny, and I have not seen as much "new-school" Cosmo behavior in them as I had in the fifth season. So there is hope.

Timmy: Martians? You brought in Martians to fight the roaches?!
Cosmo: You said nothing on Earth could destroy them, so I picked something not from Earth.
Timmy: Martians destroy everything! Except roaches! Don't you watch the movies? - Wanda's Day Off

Hhort and sweet is the truth. Good story!

Now that's a good family and I can see that some of Wanda's sense of right rubbed off on Timmy. :D


It was great to see the Oddparents rushing into the rescue like that. :D

Please keep up the good work on this great story. ;)

I thought it was a darling tale, great job.

Now that was another great chapter in showing how much Cosmo loves Wanda and vice versa. :D

It seems that Timmy's plan did work in way despite some problems . :D

Please do keep up the good work on this great story. ;)

The pacing is good, Cosmo's brain is somehow working through all that jelly, and we have a mysterious stranger with a mobile. Cool.

Again, very good. I'm not sure who the mystery man is, and I'm not going to try to guess. Keep it up!

Now this was interesting to see as Poof hold the majority amount of power to help himself and his godbrother out. :)

Also it weird to see Cosmo and Wanda misjudge not only Timmy, but their own son's abilities as well. :(

This was another great chapter and I encourage you to continue on with this even greater story for future readers like myself. ;)

You're off to a good start. My only question is the very last line, who's thoughts or dialogue is it? My thought was Timmy, but unless he's hiding near by I felt it was sort of midair.

AW...love the plot tho. i'm sick of cosmo and wanda fighting on tv. the older ones were so much better yeah? Can't wait till the next chappie!!
luv Emma

hey you're starting up a new story huh? Well I like it so far. I wonder how cosmo and wanda are going to sort their stuff out.

Sweet story. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!

Now this is an interesting story to read about.

Please keep up the good work on a great idea. ;)