 Ghostwriter 2009-03-24 . chapter 10Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 tewksgirl 2009-03-18 . chapter 10Ah, that was a great ending... very touching and I loved how you tied in the story with Dean and Waylen County. I also liked how Tom showed up to just be there for Booker. |
 xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx 2009-03-15 . chapter 4oh yay now booker gets to be a hero! as much as i love tom, he is always the hero of the story. i am so glad to see that dennis gets a chance to shine now! |
 xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx 2009-03-15 . chapter 2oh goodness now i'm addicted! i love this story, i love the story of dennis and his dad (reminds me a lot of tom and tom snr.)adding the religious bit "please God, i can't do this alone" is a good aspect. i really like it. great job so far! |
 xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx 2009-03-15 . chapter 1i've been wanting to read this one but never had the time. now that i'm on spring break, i finally can and let me just say this - i am so happy dennis is the main character. i love stories about him and i love how hanson was so nice to him. they're being civil with each other! yay! anyways, i'm off to read ch. 2! |
 tewksgirl 2009-03-13 . chapter 8Yeah! you're back! What a touching chapter...even for Booker, LOL! It was so sweet the way his mother was there for him. Very touching! |
 Ghostwriter 2008-12-11 . chapter 7Great job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 DaPimp 2008-11-13 . chapter 7ok, so I don't usually like OC's but i do like her, shes sweet. and i LOVE Lexi, she's so good for Tom. Anyway, another amazing chappie. I've really enjoyed this one |
 Hanson's Angel 2008-11-13 . chapter 7Ha-ha, only Booker would be ticked off that he wouldn't be able to smoke in the hospital while recovering from pneumonia.
I like that. . .
What a sweet chapter. Great, great details. Poor Booker. You've made him so likeable without turning him into a wimp or anything -- which is how he was, at least in my opinion. You've done yourself proud. |
 FeedYourHead77 2008-11-13 . chapter 7*SNIFFLE* I miss Elaina to!
And I missed you! Thanks for updating :)
Cannot wait for more.
Anxiously,
FYH |
 tewksgirl 2008-11-13 . chapter 7I love it when you connect the stories. So don't apologize for it.
Great chapter...Glad to see that Booker wants to help the kids out that helped saved his life. I guess he's not so bad after all! LOL! |
 DaPimp 2008-11-06 . chapter 6oo im so glad Booker is ok. Yet another amazing chappie! |
 Hanson's Angel 2008-11-06 . chapter 6Wow, what an action-filled chapter. . .it was great, we had the Jump Street gang, the bad guys, Booker and Grant and it all read really well. . .never saw that coming with Hanson saving the day. . .but I probably should've guessed, LOL. . .well done, as always. |
 tewksgirl 2008-11-06 . chapter 6Oh yeah, Tommy to the rescue (and the rest of the JS team). A lot of action in this one...I liked it a lot.
I had to laugh at Dennis telling Tom to stop hitting him. Sounds just like those two!
I only noticed a couple of spelling errors, but we are all guilty at then when we're trying to get a chapter up quick. |
 Hanson's Angel 2008-11-04 . chapter 5Oh, wow.
Just awesome.
Sick/injured Booker: love it. Don't know why, I mean, I always, always love a suffering Hanson, but you've done such a great job with Booker that I am just out of my head with seeing him like this.
Grant: He's great! I wasn't sure I was going to like him at first but I think he's such a well-written extra character or whatever they are called. Thank you for that.
And what the heck is going to happen. . .I'm actually nervous about it. . .
Well done, firebunee. Excellent. |