Enjoying the story so far. It is very refreshing and original.

Well i just read all 66 chapters and it's really great so far.

I wounder how long the storyline well go on and if the storyline goes into the time harry go's to H.W.
would it be possible for a Harry/Hermione pairing?
maybe Draco/Ginny pairing?


I look forward to your next update.

I was abit dissapointed after having read the descriptin, but that's just cause i thought Lilly would give Snape a chance back in the school before she started dating james not after they where marry'd and had a chield... But the writing seems pretty okay so i'll give it a try and tell your my opinien...

Brilliant story and please update soon thanks.

I hope the best for Albus! Please update soon!

Hurray for Severus and Larkin--and for James, too. Pity that James didn't have anything silver on him, but at least he'll make it. Larkin should get an Order of Merlin, and Severus, too--several would have died without them both.

I really enjoyed Peter, he seems to have some cunningness and sense that most others do not give him. I don't really remember who Laurel is. You have a lot of characters and plotlines, and it's hard to keep track of all of them.

Thanks for a little pleasure during an otherwise horrible time.

Nice chapter. :) Hope Laura gets to be a part of Corbin's life.

Good luck with the plotline straightening.

oh man what a bummer but she is his mother so will see what unfolds

Poor Regulas and poor Laurel :(

I'm glad Corbin's mother is taking an interest in him. As good a parent as Albus is proving to be, he will still want t know about his 'other' family and what they were like. I can't imagine that finding out he was a child of rape will be good for him, but if Corbin's mom and Albus handle it correctly, it could go better than expected.

Your ability to handle all these intricate plots has amazed me from the start. I really enjoy this story. I hope things get better with your work situation. It's our second busy season at my work too, and I can certainly empathise with your problems.

Enjoyed seeing students in research - nice to know that there are serious young witches and wizards interested in research - too often fics only have Hermione, and to some extent the twins, doing this. (Or a superharry, but I don't count those as real fics owing to the 'super'ness.)

Is there not a single Albanian detective/auror/whatever worried about the disappearances? On the other hand, if you're having trouble with the story, introducing new characters is not often a good idea. It's good to see Peter in character - not getting caught. His instinct for self-preservation is magnificent.

Enjoyed the Laurel progress. Is Lily going to be the one who approaches Laurel, being (1) the most harmless looking, (2) female, (3) Muggleborn, (4) smart enough to wheedle more info out of Laurel?

Must you interrupt, then it gets all interesting? It`s mean! Now we all must wait for the next one to find out.

Oh, bad things are going to start happening.

I am sure that between Severue, Lily, and Lucius that a cure of some sort will be figured out.

I hope everything goes well with Corbin and his Mom and his adopted Dad.