I'm so so so so sad that you never updated anything anymore! you last updated this story 5 years ago and first post it 8 years ago!

I'm not trying to flame you or anything but it saddens me to see such a good plot and story never continue and frozen forever!

Hope you would updated...someday

Interesting. That's neat how you're sticking to basically how the glitch is formed and making fanfic about MissingNo. the one who can turn into Kangaskhan?

wow!this is cooler than the last missingno. story that i read!this is wicked awesome!i have never seen a missingno, before though so i dont know much about it but i know that its time my sister was playng my silver pokemon game and i just traded her a pincher but for some odd reason it was called ?.it didnt have a call but it eventually froze the i hope that you update soon!bye!

dude, girl, you just rock at fanfics. I only wish you'd update them so I can enjoy more.

I love how this is, with the whole game-code virus, and talking to the old man...hmm, wonder what other pokemon they're gonna find. what was the previous area they went to...? *sly look
also, since MissingNo. is technically a virus, a "bug*gigglesnort*, how would that work? unless you make it so it's not a virus, but it'd still be interesting to see what happens.

I wish you'd update! *whines* show some love for your fans!

Really awsome! Please go on! I really like how this is playing out and can't wait to read the rest!

OMG! This is hilarious! I love the type of friendship Ash and Gary have. You captured it very well. I hope you write more soon! It's shaping up to be a great story!

Woohoo! This is exciting!
I can't wait to see what happens when they actually find MissingNo...:D
Update!

Haha...about time something like this came up!

Heh...that was great...even has the bug catcher in there! I remember it as if I played it yesterday...oh wait, I did. "Ah...I've had my coffee now and I feel great! Sure you can go through!
How you turned a game glitch into a story with a plot I'll never know. Will it's capture affect their world just like the game? Can't wait for the next chappy!

I'm writing this for chapter 2, even though it's chappie 1 that I'm writing from...and I can't get away with reviewing twice for the same chappie in one day...ah, well...is Mysterio gonna appear (same thing as M-block I think) sometime in the next chapter? My friends told me that Missingno wasn't very harmful, but Mysterio was VERY, VERY harmful to your game. They are linked, yes...

I wonder if Mysterio also exists in the future games as squggly line ditto (G/S/C) or are they comepletely seperate 'pokemon'? I have so many questions...I don't think that anyone could answer them all, not even the people that work at Nintendo could...well, not answer the question 'does Mewton actually exist as a virus?' Geez, I have so little knowledge of these things...it must be annoying to you. I'm just so curious about these things...I do know that Missingno is harmless to your game other than being the result of an error, it's Mysterio (or M-block) that's RREEAALLYY harmful-that's the one that really destroys your game...or at least that's what my friends with knowledge of these things told me...and I have heard crazy stories of pokemon at level 1500 or higher. Is this true as well? I'm a bit skeptical, but I believe that Missingno exists. I have never had these things happen to me, so I don't even know, besides the fact that something happened to my Gold version and everything started over from my last save and changed color.
Well, anyhoo, I'll be checking for more...I can't wait to read what happens next!
Ja ne,

Elliot Kestrel

Awesome story, Dragoness! It's humourous and mysterious too...please update, I must read more! I have always heard of this "missingno" pokemon from my friends and have always wondered if they were just telling me a fib...so it really does exist? What does it really look like in its true form...do you know? I've also heard of a pokemon called Mewton, a pokemon called M-block, and some other strange and weird happenings...is there any truth to these? I think you might know...what about the sqiggly line ditto? Oh, geez I'm playing 20 or more questions, but I have always wondered if there was truth to these rumors...did you actually catch Missingno? I must know more! One last question...what does Missingno actually do? I think it attacked my friend from a messed up game link cable one time as a butterfree with a LOT of HP, a REALLY high level, and it knew MEGAHORN. Scary, huh?...weird things have been happening...

Well, I keep reading ja? Plz update soon!

Ja ne!

Elliot Kestrel

BAKAS! I'd say they derserve it but no one derserves Missingno. It's glitch in the universe, born from a programming error in the pokemon storage and transfer system.
Missingno screws up your saved game, so is Missingno going to screw up their existences? Was that guy REALLY a bug catcher before he caught Missingno? Or is that what his history became afterwards?

I'll forgo the nit-picking today.

Hmm... I don't usually read fics with the characters from the show in them, but... this is an exception. I couldn't resist! It's an awesome fic!

That was great! I think your problem is that you've been going overboard on the angst with doing nothing but OH. This humor is much more fun. The racing was definitly appropriate and I think you've got the interaction between Ash and Gary down pat. The charecterazation of the grandfather was good and his obsession with coffee made it even better (not that there was much more to the guy..) And Ash flirting with a girl is always funny. Keep up the writingness!

Ek! _ Yes, it's not OH, but it's from you, and it's GREAT, and that's all that matters! Now let's see if I can give you the best review, because I was all ready to do so and then Dad called me up for dinner. -_- Can I manage happy hyperness after eating dry, disgusting hamburgers? Well, let's see, shall we? :P U where was I in the review box when this first came out? o_O *searches for excuse, but can't find one* Eheheheh MOVING ON! Ah, MissingN that's from the game, right? _ See how much I know? I was just like, "Yay! Ash! Yay! Gary! Yay, er, old bug catcher guy!" LOL Ash is so perfect for this missio though it's so sweet that he doesn't want to lie and do the right thing and be cautious! And being annoyance in first chapter and sugaring coffee to death, yayness! _ *squeezes him* His and Gary's bickering is priceless, too, as always. Wonder if they'll wind up killing each other before the mission's even over? Heehee, I can't wait to see! And don't worry, you'll get your urge to write OH-and other stories-back. I really didn't know it was that bad, so just to let you know, I'm here to help, and I will. _ In the meantime, this is great, and I'll be looking over for more! . . . Or hounding you for more, either way. :P And the next chapter of BH is done, so look for that real soon! Maybe that'll help your fanfiction love come back full swing. _ I hope it does! We can't lose you, Dragoness! *hugs*

You b* you beat me to the story. Now I'm really pissed. Well actually I commend someone for actually writing another story about Missngno. Heck, that was how I found Ace's fanfic Archive. I was trying to find some info about the error message in the game when I came across it. Anyways I'll be sending you an email about my story hoping that it doesn't infringe on any future parts of yours. Email cause I don't want any other peeps steallin' my ideas before I write a story about 'em. Now I'm scaring myself with my use of apostrophes. Review eh ... Well it was actually pretty cool. You write like me that's another way of saying you're a really good writer) too much; it scares me. Everything scares me. Even that fact. And the fact that I know that.

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