 David Fishwick 2009-10-24 . chapter 4I liked how you written Anakin and Obi Wan as they seemed to be protecting themselves from the conservatives on the Jedi Council who can't accept change. Please update soon thanks. |
 cheezygeezer3661 2009-06-10 . chapter 4please update soon |
 Laetitia du Chatelet 2009-05-31 . chapter 4Interesting. Please update soon. |
 mlhkvh5 2009-05-07 . chapter 4 I am enjoying your story, I really can't believe how the Jedi went against the Senate and would have killed all the other Jedi who went with Anakin and Obi Wan. This is an unusual take,and I like the way you are writing in the Mandalores to help Anakin's new order. I am looking forward to reading what happens to the Old Jedi order for what they have done! |
 Reagan 2009-05-07 . chapter 4Man that Yoda is a stubborn one. But one question. If you attack Skywalker and company it's fairly obvious the Republic will fight back or entirely cut off their funding and banish them from Coruscant. How do you fight a war with no money? Ships need fuel, even jedi need food and medical care. How does that work?
I imagine most of the Republic with side with the breakaways but someone almost certainly has to side with the Jedi or this war won't last long. The clones perhaps?
I'm glad to see you continue this. Please keep the updates coming. |
 Knives91 2009-05-06 . chapter 4Poor Ani... do you realize what you have unleashed upon the Galaxy? You have unleashed three terrors that will strike fear in even the darkest of Sith hearts... and in the hearts of the babysitters... poor suckers...
More please! |
 bandgsecurtiyaw 2009-05-06 . chapter 4Great stuff keep it up. |
 murdrax 2009-05-05 . chapter 4hmm very curious story im really anxious to see what happens next!! |
 general-joseph-dickson 2009-05-05 . chapter 43 Skywalkers! The galaxy is doomed. |
 cody m 2009-03-08 . chapter 3 this seems promising, keep it up |
 Reagan 2009-03-03 . chapter 3Wow Yoda is practically itching for a fight. This won't be pretty. Hopefully they can get away and hide for a while. Though what's going to happen to Padme? She's still a senator yet she's married to the other side. Please keep going I want to see where this goes. |
 Lady Andromeda Black 2009-02-16 . chapter 3I really like this story, though the grammar errors are sort of distracting. If you need a beta I am willing to do so.
This is an interesting premise and I hope that you update soon.
This will go on my story alerts.
Andromeda |
 bandgsecurtiyaw 2009-02-04 . chapter 3Awesome story so far. |
 Silver Spider 2009-01-31 . chapter 3A very interesting set up, indeed. I especially like that you've included Shaak Ti in this. It makes the whole thing feel more realistic if it's not JUST Skywalker and Kanobi who felt the Jedi were unjust. Can't wait for more. |
 general-joseph-dickson 2009-01-23 . chapter 3Interesting. |