oh! so good! there are so few gatekeeper stories, and even fewer of this type of quality! awsome story! I can't wait to read more!

lol, I had to crack when Sapling and Flint's conversation, lol, I love those two! XD

WOW! i really love it so far!! i love the power of 5 series just as much as alex rider and theres never enough fanfics about them! my only question - isn't matt and the others supposed to be fourteen? or is this you just setting it up before he turns fourteen??
keep it up!! please post the next chapter soon!

Whell you are wrong,my friend.Dead wrong.I lost a finger to that review button.It does bite! :P

I was curious about what happened when he was captive too,but my imagination is not that grand,so im going to leave that to you lol

I really like what youve done so far!

Can't wait to see the 'fun'!

-Megan

Aw when I was rereading Nightrise I thought about what could have happened when he said he was the old ones' captive. And now we know! Hehe. It's very interesting, keep writing!

Microwaves? Oh well, good chapter, dark, but that was obvious. Hope your arm feels better.

I really enjoy this stroy you're an excellent writer. KEEP IT UP!

Find Truth
Kale Ride

This was pretty good! Keep up the great work and update soon!

P.S.

I'll give you the most plot bunnies! lol!

Wow i really like this story! keep the story going! theres nothignworse than a onechapter story that leaves you on a cliff hanger and never gets updated! so keep going!
Find Truth
Kale Ride

Awsome story idea. The chapter was really good. keep writing

wow that was amazing! ive been waiting for another Po5/Gatekeepers fic for a long time now! i like this a lot! do you think you will incorperate matt's present life into this as well? thankx for posting and please update soon!

This is extremly good! I hav been waiting for ages for someone to right something like this! Please update soon!