i liked it a lot but ya know? it was somewhat sad at the end but at the same time happy... well im tellin you this: u made me cry! >-<

wow. xD that was just...cute. and so sad. and uh- why is it not Laven in the end? -blinks- though i see no problem of Kanda and Lavi being together.

Aw! That was the best way to end a chapter! That was so cute! Love the Death Note reference!

wow, this story was beautiful. this last chapter actually made me cry. when i first saw this story in the archive i read the summary but i skipped past it. but then it started bugging me (i.e. randomly popping to the forefront of my mind during spastic intervals) and i just had to come back and read it. i'm very glad i did n_n you're an amazing author and this story was great.

good job!

Amazing story. Loved it in its entirety!

Really great ending to a really great story! I think this is a perfect conclusion. A sequel (though I'd love it) isn't needed! Everything is summed up well and I congratulate you on an amazing story!! =]

*SQUE* I LOVE YOU! ;w;

T_T very happy and lovely ending T_T both the laviyuu and laven compliments one another. beautiful story!

*sobs*

I love the ending...

*sobs*

But...WHY in the end not laven?! *sobs*

Poor Allen... TT_TT

Hey, hey, how about make another ending version but this time laven ending version (not bad ending)

yay for life!

That was a cute ending! Yay! It would be awsome if there was a sequel because I definatly see an opening for one.

aw! Go Allen!

*lol crying* that was such a pretty ending~ and yay! I'm so glad Allen came back >w<

Ahh, you truely are an amazing writer, Saya-sama :>

~ Noodles x

Aw, it was a happy ending... -stares at you with love- That was so cute and sweet, and Allen is reborn! XD Love conquers all and of course death can never be the end~ It was a lovely ending to an awesome plot! The RaYu goodness made me squeal and Allen's heroic character makes me coo :D You've done great Saya-v

Kuro

well i'll be sad not to read this anymore, but i have to admit i loved the ending, too!!