and some say it's not possible 2 talk dirty and stil b luving! psht! u proved 'em wrong! awesome! XD

i have no words.

seriously.

wow. sexy as.

however, be disappointed, not updating for a while. sorry.

x

Whoa! Okay, I found my favorite - hands down!

Well Hot Damn! that was good. very good.

LOL! I'll never look at strawberries again without thinking of this one-shot. F*cking HOT my dear. Excellent first time and a naughty lemon at that. I'm impressed.

Loved the back story too. This might be a nice one to do a prequel for, up to the lemon and then possibly beyond.

Sorry to disappoint that I didn't update today but I'm a review junkie so I'll probably do it earlier than I originally planned.

Thanks for sharing!

Wow! Very hot!

i can't believe this is your first fan fiction. wow ... just wow! this was so wonderfully wonderful. i really don't think it could have been any more perfect. you are getting faves from me all across the board! )

Yeah, I think I'm really going to like this contest.

cripes. this is your first?

holy hell, you've made me feel like I need to take the coldest damn shower ever. you should definitely write more... :)

Great one-shot. I hope to read more of your stuff.