| Reviews for That Girl |
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Teeny tiny twilight 10/17/08 . chapter 1 _ yayayayayaya! you are my hero! i love your fluff. sorry about the guy deleting your files, that sucks. Give me a name and i'll hunt him down for you ;)anyways, i'm looking forward to more of your work (hint hint) and i can sympathise with wanting a break with school starting and breaking dawn and all that Jazz, but i am ADDICTED! so please, give me my fix? |
orangemice311 10/17/08 . chapter 1Aww.. this was really cute. I'm sorry about your documents, i'm sure you'll be able to get them back, I know it is terrible when something like that happens. |
Bubble Rao 10/17/08 . chapter 1it is so very in character |
borntodanceninefour 10/17/08 . chapter 1OME! So sweet! The ending was spectacular! (That geek squad guy is a dirk. XD) Xoxo, Michelle (: |
VampChick00 10/17/08 . chapter 1I would've killed the geek squad guy if he even thought of it. gr. see, but that's why I have sisters. lol. i liked it, and breaking dawn already came out. so it's just breaking dawn fluff. |
slimjimjerky 10/17/08 . chapter 1YAY FLUFF! I loved fluff ;)) |
InLoveWithJesse 10/17/08 . chapter 1This was such a sweet little story! I always adore your pre-Breaking Dawn oneshots, they're so cute and fluffy... No errors that I could see by the way :) |
Mizra 10/17/08 . chapter 1Marshmallows couldn't have been fluffier than that. I love sweet little stories for the missing moments of the series. And I loved Edward's rant about being "that boy" in Eclipse. Made my heart go a-flutter, y'know? Nice job, dear! |
Miranda 10/17/08 . chapter 1 squad.i'm sorry that's not funny but just a litle random. awesome story. I myself am reading breaking dawn for the 3rd time and enjoy every second of it. But your story remind me that even though the series is over I still have somethig to look foward to. sincerely,Miranda p.s. are you looking foward to the twilight movie? |
lorit 10/17/08 . chapter 1It was simple, but sweet. I liked it, thanks. |
nerdify 10/17/08 . chapter 1Ha ha, that was really cute! |
theone101 10/17/08 . chapter 1aw that was very cute ... and not too cheesey |
his babi seal 10/17/08 . chapter 1Very cute! And I don't blame you about the Geek Squad thing - that's horrible! Hope that hasn't completely screwed things up for you. But you're an awesome writer so I know you'll work things out! Great job! |
abrightertomorrow 10/16/08 . chapter 1this was really good :) |
ibelieveintruelove 10/16/08 . chapter 1Aww I love it! This is what I wanted Bella to say to Edward all along lol. Great job! And that sucks about the Geek Squad. I would die if I lost my word docs, so I can't even begin to imagine how stressed you must be :-( Just do what I do, find a good piece of Edward/Bella fluff and let it make you happy! Hahaha that's what I just did with your latest story ;-) Awesome job! |