NO, It can't be complete, you could do so much with what you have right here. Very good story, very well written.)

this.. was amazing. i enjoyed reading every bit of it!

i loved your story.

short, sweet, and unforgetable.

keep it up!

This story is so cute! Genesis is a tad OOC but he was 16 in the fic so, who cares!

You write brilliantly, and your one of the few people I have seen use the rules of quotations(pesky commas are so dumb
Anyway, I really love this story!