just beautiful!

Heartbreaking!

Favorite Line: Perfect,” he said between his teeth. “Every time…like the first time.”

DAMN! That was the hottest angst ever posted. Well done!

Hey great job. A lot of people on here are awful at writing and I despise struggling through a work filled with typos. Not only did you write well, but you were able to characterize Sara and Gil perfectly. To be honest I wish this could be in an episode, yet we both know the writers wouldn't show us that much of their relationship. Anyways, keep writing!

sorry, forgot to leave a review earlier. I loved it, definitely something that could have happened off screen. Future tense, that's right...

I'm sorry for not reviewing this earlier, but this was a great, bittersweet piece. Thank you for giving us the goodbye we didn't get to see. This story provided the hope we so desperately need right now. As always, thank you, thank you for your wonderful post ep stories; they are always a joy to read.

oh my golly gosh that was hot and sweet and cute!

This story is perfect. Grissom going from angry to tender, not sure how to handle himself and Sara being the strength, as always, even tho she's breaking inside.
Thank you :)

Shoulda, woulda, coulda...they need to ride off in the sunset together.

That was beautiful! Thank you!

Absolutely beautiful, and frankly this is about how I think it would have been. Call me excessively optimistic, but I think they will get together when Grissom leaves in the mid season. I think they are setting the stage for his burn out which is so evident in Sara's burnout.

Thanks for a truly beautiful story.

That was such a great story! I have to say that this cheered me up quiet a bit from the eppy on thursday!! Loved it!! =)

I really needed this story-hug, especially after last night!! Great job! If this had been in the episode, I would have been a lot happier!! So, I am glad that is here...

I so needed to know I wasn't alone in having my heart
broke-thanks for the hug..the hope...and the knowledge that
yes, it's "only" a tv show-but it matters to us. Thanks
for always having the right words to say!

This is good. I really hope that they will reunite wben Grissom leaves. Thank you so much for this.