This was great! I'm laughing so hard right now.
Everyone was in character with all the little changes that growing up would cause. I especially liked pregnant-and-cranky Mai, although Zuko seemed to be the one having the mood swings. She manages to be the only sane member of the group.

Great job!

This story kept me laughing from beginning to end. Love it, absolutely love it, even if I don't usually like some of the pairings. It's the sign of a good writer that he or she can make you love even the ships you hate the most. And seriously? Toph x Iroh? That much concentrated amazingness might be dangerous to have in one place. If they have a kid it may just destroy the world. Hooray crack pairing! :D

Despite the Maiko (gag) and the Kataang (shudder), this was a really AWESOME (^^) story! I loved it lots! Everyone is right in character and it was funny.

Not sure I like Komo...I'm an Urzai girl but at least Zuko shares my view ;)

All in all, super great long story. Great job :D

This was NOT what I was expecting when a friend sent me the link to this tale.

It was even better!

Excellent work on making even me think well of a relationship I'd usually hate to see. Very well done!

wow, that was really funny, and I sort of want to know what happens next...

Interesting. Though I would have liked better if Toph loved Iroh but Iroh, instead of submitting, gave her wisdom and...I don't know...helped her...everything was beautifully written and you kept everyone in character.
The last couple lines made me laugh =)

I really enjoyed this. My only concern is that having that much concentrated awesome (Toph and Iroh) in one location for too long might throw off the planetary orbit or something.

Wonerfuly well-written! I enjoyed everything about this fic, to the last iota. I cannot wait to see more of your work in the future!

...I was scared of this fic, but the Maiko in the middle, and the Sukka throughout, and /oh god/ the Kataang proposal scene... shockingly, the Iroph was well-exectuted. And CUTE to the point of agony. I wonder if you'll write it again...?

That was beatiful and funny.

Crack paring! Actually, I quite liked this story, all thing considered. You addressed the 'forbidden relationship' issue quite well, and the story was highly enjoyable overall. Thumbs up! ~Your soul is technicolor~

k this wz AWSUM! rite sequl plz!

“You know…Uncle brews a special tea so that you don’t…you know…get the girl…” He made a ballooning gesture over his abdomen to finish out the remainder of that statement. “It’s definitely more effective than just pulling out.”

By far the funniest line i've ever seen in a fanfiction, I was actually laughing out loud while reading this on my computer and I rarely do that.

This was funny and really awesome, great job.

When I first clicked on this, it was merely in curiosity as I wondered how you would pull this off.

You did. And damn. I think you made me ship it, kinda sorta. Which is uncool. Cause I already have a Toph ship I like, thank you very much, and... Oh no. I don't suppose there are any other stories like this out there, either. I will have to suffer in my torn indecision. Which is, you know, always fun, when it comes to ships. (best part is? I mean that. This should be fun) :D

Aw! This was so cute yet so amazingly creepy at the same time!

I enjoyed it very much :D good job!