dude, it's been about a year now since this was published...
AND I'M STILL ACHING LIKE A MOTHER FOR PART 2
is this discontinued? D:

Oh, that is /mean/./ Simply delicious so far - I can't wait for the next update (but I will anyway :P) and lol 'Mr. Smith...' Sora is so freakin' smooth.

~Tekko

Yeah, well, I suppose six months isn't really all that soon, and you might have abandoned this, but just so you know, if you wanted to update...well, I'll certainly be waiting. :P

What is your definition of soon? It's been a while, and this is hilarious. I hope you update :)!

*melts into a puddle of happy goo*

How do you write lemony goodness and have it still be cute?! I will never understand how to do that...

This is amazing and weird and fun and gorgeous and...yes.
So much yes.

Can't wait for more :)
Katie

HOT! lol, Poor Roxas, being all sex-starved and what-not.

Very descripitive, I somethimes got confusing at who's thoughts we were following, but I liked knowing what they were both thinking at the same time!

Now, I want the 'Good part!'

o.0 i guess i'm not allowed to read then...for 30 years above? lol. xD hm, i know Roxas's so darn cute and Axel's so freakin' handsome, but that's kinda extreme. -laughs- poor the blonde witnessed something... -cough- unexpected from his boss. -giggle- not that his eyes are virgin, i guess.

Oh yes!! Very good start for AkuRoku-fic. Well written and hot.More please!:3

That's...seriously awesome. XP I can't wait to see more!! Please update soon! *drools*

OH NO! I'M UNDER 30!! Jkjk.

okay, AUGH, I'm SO SORRY for reading this late. I didn't even REALIZE that you written it for me this fast cause I was just browsing around one day, and I clicked into ur profile cause i was 'generating ideas'. Hokay, so I saw this story, and im like, ahaha, sounds awesome. so i clicked, and read. and im like WHOA! ITS MY BDAY FIC! NO WAY. AWESOMERES!

So THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for being the FIRST PERSON EVER to write me a gift-fic. its absolutely wonderful. :D

Okay, now to start my REAL review. HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA. This is so funny and sexy at the same time. I always figured that AXEL would be the one that was horny at work, but (shrug) i guess I was wrong. xD haha. Its a nice change tho.

Can't wait for the next part!! :DD

Thank you SO MUCH, again, and sorry for being so late! I actually got an idea! so the dedic will be comin' soon!! :D

H-h-h-h-holy... I guess it was a bad idea of me to read something of yours while listening to a song that makes it hard for me to breathe[What? You've never felt that way about music before? *loser*] as it is *A*
I got dizzy @w@
YES. HORNY ROXAS IS ALWAYS GOOD. *lecher*
*drooldrooldrool* I MUST STALK THIS FIC.

I like it so far! Its got like the right amount of detail and thats what makes a story awesome ^^ can't wait for part two!

Write more.

Now.

Go.

:D

I love how flustered they both were when Rox fell. xD

holy...shi...

(insert massive nosebleed from the overstimulation of amazingly well put together writting and AkuRoku here)

update soon!