aw to the nth power (srry i should be doing my alg. 2 hw) anyways... that was awsome, i really liked all of them they are all quite intresting characters arnt they

This is great. I love the conversations.I like how you made McGonagall a rule breaker, which is so unlike her now, although there have been moments when she stops beeing so strict (examples: getting a little drunk once in a while, sending Lockhart after the monster although she knew he was a fake, just so she could get him out of her way, telling Peeves how to unscrew the chandelier, indirectly incouraging the students in their protests against Umbridge, etc.)

Maybe you should make one with Dunbledore, Tom, Severus, James, Sirius, Remus and Peter. Or you could continue with other girls like Molly, Ginny, Tonks and Lily.

That was so cute! lol I liked little Lily's the best - she's a very clever girl. I think you wrote her perfectly, what else would you expect from a Potter and a Weasley? ;-) Nice job!

Great job on this, it was well written and original! And extremely cute :)

xox Sacha

Very funny - and Lily's comment ("You're such a pushover.") is brilliant. Great job on this!

Reader-Writer.

Very very cute. Is this a one-shot?

kool! story, i really liked it, hope you write more :-)