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Jetfires girl
2009-11-30 . chapter 9
YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY!X3 I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG!XD
Diamond White01
2009-11-29 . chapter 9
This fanfic is just so col :D I love it. Please update soon :D I hope Hot Shot will remain in his/her femme body and Optimus will be happy with her/him :D Please update- I can't wait to see more of this.
Hot Shot's Pikapal
2009-07-21 . chapter 9
Haha, that last thing with Red and Hot Shot was funny XD!

Loved this Chapter! Keep up the good work! XD :D :)
ShadowThief93
2009-05-23 . chapter 9
omgomgomgomg! update! this is awesome! =D
Fenn
2009-05-03 . chapter 9
This is really good so far. I hope you update it soon. I'm ready for some more OptimusxHotShot
Shizuka Taiyou
2009-04-25 . chapter 8
Wow. total shocker there.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-04-25 . chapter 7
Yep definatly not a good move for OP. Try again dude.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-04-25 . chapter 6
Man how much more do I have to say that I love your fics?

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-04-25 . chapter 5
NEED MORE OF YOUR FICS GIRL! NEED...MORE...AWSOMENESS!

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-04-25 . chapter 4
More. MORE I SAY!

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-04-25 . chapter 3
Love the fic. And the Starscream and Shotster pic. It's a scetch of em right? If it is I like it. Really like it. I would love to see it in color too. That would be an awsome sight to see if they were in color.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-04-25 . chapter 2
WANT MORE GIRLINESS!

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
MORE!

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freak-who-is-freakishly-freaky
2009-04-15 . chapter 9
I LUV it! it's so cool! great stuff, dude, now SPEED IT UP! so they've established they
freak-who-is-freakishly-freaky
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
it's always hotshot, now ain't it? i like it, keep up the good stuff.
freakishly freaky freak thought: now why, oh why, does it happen to be hsXop? i'll tell ya why, cos they were already lovers! well, in other fanfics, and in still more fanfics, they're father and son. what if there was a fic crossover? eww...
yes, it IS a good idea to gouge your eyes out, cos i wrote the infamous ratchet chapter. *licks lips* that was so much fun...
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