That was heartbreaking and sweet. Perfect.

ohh... cute!
i'm trying hard to imagine little Oro blushing... still failed, anyway :p
nice job, STGirl ^^

ooh, very good. i love how you were able to use that one quote to describe their whole relationship in, like, 500 words. AWESOME!!

This was really interesting, a bit funny and overall depressing.

^_^ Aw...cute. Sort of depressing, but cute. I like the way the comment changes in meaning constantly, and what that means deep down within the meaning itself. Very nice look at their relationship here!

Oh I loved this ^_^ OroJir is my favourite pairing next to OroKabu. It was funny and very, very sweet at the same time. Glad to see you writing more again ^_^ Cheers,

AngeloftheOdd (yeah first reviewer!)