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Reviews for: Tracing the LWord
Rogen-chan
2009-03-25 . chapter 1
I actually teared up when I read the part about Sasuke moving the picture of his family to make room for the picture of team 7. ^_^
loathsome child
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
Ah, I loved it. It was touching. Are you still planning on continuing? No, probably, but I hope you do.
Ashimattack
2009-02-06 . chapter 1
omg
write some more
pleasepleaseplease?
my favourite part was the bit about the picture
made me want to cry man
Emo Fox
2009-01-23 . chapter 1
I like it. :D
KiaraNxiar
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
I like it. The concept is nice and refreshing. It's also a little funny but still has depth. Would love to see how it goes.
ShatteredDiamonds
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
But I saw you move the other picture.

(The one with your family in it.)


I don't think I can describe how awesome these two lines are. Like, truthfully, totally awesome.

I've never seen this before and I really like it. It's filled with emotion and frustration.

As for concrit? I don't think I can give you any, but later on I will.

I'll be waiting for an update on this wonderful work of art.

With Much Love,
Future Mrs. Szmanda,
~SD~
CheddarPixie
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
Yeah was very much awesome :3

I look forward to the next installment
fishbird
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
Perfectly bizarre. That means perfect in my book.
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2008-10-17 . chapter 1
Yeah, fourth! Anyway, it is bizarre, but in a good way. I really like how the letters skip around because it makes the reader feel like they totally missed important events, so you must rely on the letters. That creates an intimate feeling between Naruto and Sasuke. This is definitely something I could see Naruto doing in the anime, just writing letter after letter as part of the healing process. Keep on writing, can't wait till the next chapter. By the way, is it meant as friendship or romance (love is a very general subject)?
Rohxez
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
Yo! Hm It seems to me that it must be hard writing Naruto's thoughts like this, in a simple but still very deep way. And keeping him in character must be difficult since we never get an actual indepth tour of Naruto's inner mechanism in the anime or manga beyond that of the frequently occasional flashback. With that said, so far, i think you're doing a good job of both! ^^ Keep up the good work, yeah and I'll be looking forward to your next chapter! Ja ne!
man-chan
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
an incredible concept the only advice I can give you is to add small portians of story between the letters
Revan
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
utterly and totally badass, keep it going.
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