"He’d been staying at Zack’s place all week and exchanging all sorts of bodily fluids"
All sorts, hmm? That line probably wasn't meant to be pervy in any way, shape, or form but I totally lol'd. XD
Great job, this was really cute. I was totally expecting it to end with Cloud sneezing or something. Hahaha!

*rushes to the dentist*

ADORABLE! I really love your fics :P you and choboco cloud are one of my favourite authors :)

loved this!

I know this sounds cheeky but it would be AMAZING if you would continue to write clack or zack/cloud watever :P Just incase you weren't :P

i know that makes no sense whatsoever but i LOVE your fics!

gaah, i got cavities!! it hurts!! DX too sweet, i can't stop squealing!! kyaa!! xD i loved how Zack jutted out his lower lip for 'added effect'. XD and the conversation they had, Cloud said, 'i love you, not your snots'. lol. xD goota go, my teeth hurts pretty bad. -laughs-

Aww, how unbearably cute! Who would've thought that snot crust or sneezing in someone's face could be so romantic?

Great Job. I've never really liked this paring before but I think you just gave me a new fandom. ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter.

Aww, I just happen to have the flu right now! I know exactly how Zack feels. -__- But having some yaoi to go with it makes it better! I feel so special to have fluffy sick!fics to read while I'm out of bussiness for a while, you're a total angel. I feel a little better now. ;3

Aw! That was so lovely! I have a cold myself at the moment so I can sympathise with Zack :D Great job on the fic!

Aww, this was übercute--in some way :3
Short, but funny and sweet ^^

Aw... this was too cute! Minus the snot bleh

that was uber cute X3

Men in general are the biggest babies when they're sick. LOL. This was really cute and I have to say that Zack is a much happier person when he's sick than I am. Good job!