Excellent chapters once more. Thank you so much for posting and please keep up the good work, with that ending I really must know how things work out.

What a deliciously whumpy tale you've penned. *iz a proud whumper* You whump Ronon and Shep so prettily. Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers! }:O

Raven

Um, is there a reason the same chapter is posted twice? Kind of a downer.

With the advent of this chapter, your story includes everything I am interested in. I am amazed how inclusive this story is-obviously very well thought-out; it transcends many expectations I had, and I'm glad that, after two years, you are still going strong!

Good job! Give yourself a round of applause! IMMEDIATELY!

The length between updates is torture! Would it be possible to bribe with various virtual goodies to finish this story first before tackling the others? A Sheppard clone, perhaps? Ronon clone? Rodeny clone? All three? Perhaps a story? Pretty please?

Excellent chapter once again. How about you work on getting the next one out before the others? Maybe? It's hard to keep switching between stories, plus I really want to know what's happening with Sheppard in the "present" time.

I hope you are rotating back to this story soon! Love it so far!

I kind of want to smack Cole upside the head. I know he was just looking out for his people, but he certainly made matters worse. And I hope Ronon is able to get through to poor Sheppard soon, but in the meantime I'm happy to see some comfort starting to happen. I do so love the comfort :D

Excellent chapter. It's really unfortunate that the wolves aren't exactly willing to discuss anything. I'm betting Cole is regretting mentioning Birkita to anyone right now. Keep up the great work and please update soon. The story is awesome.

No! No rotating stories! I told myself I'd have to abandon this one, though I had it on story alers. One of my faves, and I found myself emotionally invested in it, but with no updates asap, I might as well give up on it. Sorry. There are so many out there unfishished and unlikely to be finished, such as kiku65's Thanatos, that it's hard sticking with a tale when updates are few and far between. It's also hard picking up where we left off. Hope your updates are more frequent. If not, I'm outta here. :P

Wow, this is very well written! Thank you for sharing! It's very different, but in a good way. :D

Awesome, I wasn't expecting an update on this one for a while. There were a few grammatical errors, but I forgive you for the relatively quick update. Sheppard really won't last much longer if he isn't at least half-Garou. I'm beginning to see why Birkita let Ronon live once she got back to Atlantis, however that happened.

I guess my question now is did Nodonn do what Birkita had asked about bringing all the pack leaders and their Teeth. While I doubt the SGC will want to cooperate, especially with Sheppard, these next few chapters should be interesting.

Excellent work.

At last an update. Great work. I was worried you were going to let this lie for another two months or something. All the Garou know about Birkita now huh? Well, that's not going to go well. It's also nice to see Sheppard and Birkita working together in the pits, but I imagine things are going to start going badly very soon.

You're going to update this soon won't you? The anticipation of the next chapter in both this story and Caliber is killing me.

Oh, man, please tell me this is the start of Sheppard coming to realize that he's safe and among friends. I so adored Ronon holding Sheppard, comforting him while he was sick, then continue to hold and assure him afterwards. I've been wanting someone to hug and hold the poor boy forever, and my happiness was mighty that it finally happened :D