What a depressing and sweet tale. You captured Mia perfectly in here.

The idea was fantastic and I liked the way you pulled it off. You weren't as heavy-handed about what was going on like some of the others on FF. Well done. It was nicely written.

this is pretty good. keep it up

Wow.

Don't know what else to say...

Just...

:(

D'AW.

-sniffle-

I just re-beat T&T, and your fic satisfied my need for Miego. xD

Very nice! I actually liked how you wrote that. I didn't know you were a PW fan as well.