I liked it. It's too Blackwater xD

I love this so much!)

Nice.

plz write more as soon as u can i love it

So I've been putting off reading...everything, because I figured it would take to long. But you really weren't kidding about this being like 100 words, so now I just feel stupid. Stupid and lazy.

Anyway, I should probably talk about you in your review. So...

The idea behind this was great, how it's our flaws that draws people to us, annoying characteristics that the Renesmonter isn't supposed to have. The clipped style really worked to capture the over all bitterness of the story. And I really liked the line in the middle, where she's beaten and not-quite-broken and kissing him back.
Well done.

Nicely done.

This is probably my favorite pairing in the book.)

aw! omg! that is SO CUTE!

love blackwater

Aww, cute! And so true, haha

This was absolutely amazing. Seriously, I absolutely loved this.

, write more! please

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a little short but very good!

please continue the story!

that was short but still good!

wat great riting! pleaz continue this, pleaz dont let this end!

Aww... so, so, cute. like always.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx