god i love this
its wonderful
this deserves more love than its gotten
plz plz PLZ continue it!

I like Kakuzu's little self debate- I often do that with myself when I'm picking out fruits, too. BTW, the persimmons are perfect this time of year.

...Great Great Great. I wish this had more reveiws. Please update soon.

Great job, very beautiful. I could almost taste the fruit :)

This was so powerful. I just love how you portray Kakuzu. Somehow, it's so REAL. Raw, deep, the imagery is perfect.

It's a pity there aren't any reviews, this story has real promise. I look forward to when Yugito enters the picture.

~Jen