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Thief-Trickster
2009-12-26 . chapter 1
“Us,” he repeated, drawing out the word. “I don’t know, Win. What about us?”

I dunno why but this line just struck me. It really stuck. I think it's the way he called her Win. I'm just picturing it in my head.

And this line was just to-die-for funny

“You looked great without a shirt?”

“I appreciate the compliment, but no.”
empathapathique
2009-12-25 . chapter 1
Haha! Very funny! Loved it :)
!
2009-12-12 . chapter 1
Aw.. so sweet.
fireblazie
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Oh, that was adorable. This just cements the fact that fluff has always been and always WILL be my favorite genre :D
AnImE.KaRaSu
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
Love It! (keep that going) It's so... them!
Executed perfectly! Sugoi@.@
me:)
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
That was so cute!
Loved it:))
please-knock
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Great writing, great characterization... Thanks for writing this!
Kipcha
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Aww, very very cute! And a always, it has to end in tormenting one another :D Really enjoyed it!
favilla
2009-04-20 . chapter 1
This was so adorable!! One of the best EdWin fics I've read, very in-character.
Aoki Aya
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
I absolutely adored this! You kept the two in character really well, which I don't usually find in fics! Very sweet! Keep writing! :D
Keiyou
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
Aw how cute
CreativebutLazy
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
awe, what a cute sweet story.^_^
HimeDono
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
Such a cute story! Edward+Winry=Love
Hikari
2009-03-17 . chapter 1
AWW! ^-^ That's so cute! they should really do that in the manga.
alchemichelper101
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
very cute...luv this story...XD
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