 Thief-Trickster 2009-12-26 . chapter 1“Us,” he repeated, drawing out the word. “I don’t know, Win. What about us?”
I dunno why but this line just struck me. It really stuck. I think it's the way he called her Win. I'm just picturing it in my head.
And this line was just to-die-for funny
“You looked great without a shirt?”
“I appreciate the compliment, but no.” |
 empathapathique 2009-12-25 . chapter 1Haha! Very funny! Loved it :) |
 ! 2009-12-12 . chapter 1 Aw.. so sweet. |
 fireblazie 2009-08-13 . chapter 1Oh, that was adorable. This just cements the fact that fluff has always been and always WILL be my favorite genre :D |
 AnImE.KaRaSu 2009-08-05 . chapter 1Love It! (keep that going) It's so... them!
Executed perfectly! Sugoi@.@ |
 me:) 2009-07-27 . chapter 1 That was so cute!
Loved it:)) |
 please-knock 2009-07-25 . chapter 1Great writing, great characterization... Thanks for writing this! |
 Kipcha 2009-05-13 . chapter 1Aww, very very cute! And a always, it has to end in tormenting one another :D Really enjoyed it! |
 favilla 2009-04-20 . chapter 1This was so adorable!! One of the best EdWin fics I've read, very in-character. |
 Aoki Aya 2009-04-18 . chapter 1I absolutely adored this! You kept the two in character really well, which I don't usually find in fics! Very sweet! Keep writing! :D |
 Keiyou 2009-04-11 . chapter 1Aw how cute |
 CreativebutLazy 2009-03-24 . chapter 1awe, what a cute sweet story.^_^ |
 HimeDono 2009-03-24 . chapter 1Such a cute story! Edward+Winry=Love |
 Hikari 2009-03-17 . chapter 1 AWW! ^-^ That's so cute! they should really do that in the manga. |
 alchemichelper101 2009-03-06 . chapter 1very cute...luv this story...XD |