 Nimbus 1944 2008-11-03 . chapter 1It's been over a year's wait for this story, but well worth it! Excellently portrayed characters as usual. Glad to see you back. |
 Loveland 2008-10-19 . chapter 1Sweet scene. Again, a few typos, and grammer errors. But I liked how you protrayed Luna's relationship with her father. |
 SomeGuyFawkes 2008-10-18 . chapter 1Interesting scene. |
 ellen 2008-10-18 . chapter 1 i find this story...peaceful...very sweet and comforting...
please do keep writing... |
 Dead-Luthien 2008-10-18 . chapter 1another wonderful story about Luna :D I love it :D |
 Pray for me. Pray 2008-10-18 . chapter 1Oh marvellous. I especially loved the bit about Xenophilius trying to get Luna back by selling her friends. Very inspiring. |
 fledge 2008-10-18 . chapter 1It's so good to see you are still writing! I was afraid you had stopped for good - it's been rather a long time, hasn't it?
Another great bittersweet story. Well done! |
 Ember Nickel 2008-10-18 . chapter 1Hmm, I thought Luna's segue straight into the plimpies was a bit abrupt. We are used to the unsettling from her, but I didn't expect them to be that distant. |
 yellow 14 2008-10-18 . chapter 1Sad and sweet. Keep writing |