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Reviews for: Growing up
Nimbus 1944
2008-11-03 . chapter 1
It's been over a year's wait for this story, but well worth it! Excellently portrayed characters as usual. Glad to see you back.
Loveland
2008-10-19 . chapter 1
Sweet scene. Again, a few typos, and grammer errors. But I liked how you protrayed Luna's relationship with her father.
SomeGuyFawkes
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
Interesting scene.
ellen
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
i find this story...peaceful...very sweet and comforting...
please do keep writing...
Dead-Luthien
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
another wonderful story about Luna :D I love it :D
Pray for me. Pray
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
Oh marvellous. I especially loved the bit about Xenophilius trying to get Luna back by selling her friends. Very inspiring.
fledge
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
It's so good to see you are still writing! I was afraid you had stopped for good - it's been rather a long time, hasn't it?
Another great bittersweet story. Well done!
Ember Nickel
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
Hmm, I thought Luna's segue straight into the plimpies was a bit abrupt. We are used to the unsettling from her, but I didn't expect them to be that distant.
yellow 14
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
Sad and sweet. Keep writing
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