Wow, I really love it! :) I hope you'll update more chapters soon, because I can't wait!

I really hope you update this! Its awesome!

Oh this is too cute to let go! Please continue. Maybe they can go to on another day's tour in town and ... get lost together? I dunno, just this story made my night :-) I hope you get inspiration to continue.

OI~!
you gotta update this story...
kya~
it's way too... uh...
romantic?
(>/<)

maa maa...
just update this story and I'll be
happy...
X)

hahaa

more powers~!
X)

hmm... its not thaat i have ideas...
but maybe you should make the chapters longer...
I kno it's hard *almost died while writing one of the only stories she's ever written* but it's so short! I want to read more...jelous is good, give it a purpose maybe
ok i'm done giving ideas, I liked it, so update soon!

such a cute story

I was really happy when I saw that you updated, and this was actually not that bad. But yeah, Hayato and Takeshi are their first names. And this has nothing to do with your story but I realized the other day that Hayato looks like Sephiroth (Final Fantasy) with short hair and they're both compared to cephalopods(Hayato= octopus, Sephy= squid). I just felt like sharing that with someone, no one I know reads KHR.

I really like this story!
i think it's really great!!
will there be Yaoi in the end?
anyway, keep on going!
idea: you can get someone to sleep talk/walk
it can be funny :D and you can play with it
can't wait for the next chap!

Im sure some people have already told you this, but just make sure, Yamamoto is his surname and Gokudera is also his surname. ^.^ awesome chapter, i loved it. haha.

well I like your history its really good ^^ and yeah Hayato and Takeshi are they first name. And well I no´t good with ideas but they could have another excurssion and get lost and whe can see Takeshi prtoctingt what is HI`S tha will be cute ^//^

It's cute. Looking forward next chap ^^

Yea ur right. In America, their names would be said as Takeshi Yamamoto and Hayato Gokudera. The first name before the last

needs more but loved it!
yeah Hayato and Takeshi are their first names and Goku and Yamam are their surnames.

Ideas= maybe Takeshi's thoughts when hugging Hayato
then Hayato thoughts having Takeshi hugging :D

then carry on from there

i recommed more fluff and kisses, but your story is fine. Also, Hayato and Takeshi are their first names. Please update again soon!

I'm glad you updated! Keep it up! <3