HOLY MOLY!

I absolutely love this story, from beginning to end!
The way you wrote this is just so powerful and ever so
flawless. There is such a large build-up of suspense,
as the last line completely blew me away.

& the way all the teachers can easily pick up on
Roxas's dilemna was bloodcurdling.

Especially Zexion.
-_-

Nevertheless, you obviously did a fantastic job, as I
highly believe you should continue this.

MUST UPDATE! MUST UPDATE

wow...this story is awesome. you write it so that it doesnt sound as sick as it does in real life. my only problem? you havent updated it!

Oh my god. I love the story so far and it kind p reminds me of the book "Flowers in the Attic" by V.C. something. (Man! I love that book!)
Ok, so wan thing IS confusing me. That is, what cause Namine's scars again? I'm too lazy to reread the last chapters and I have a lot of things to do after this, so, if you don't mind, answer me.
Anyway, hope you update soon!

i really liked it
now all you have to do is finish it
please even though it is kind
of twisted it's interesting and
really does stand out.

going to update this i really like it

Woah! I'm loving this story! Forbidden love = _<"

P.S. - I love your Larxel stories, too. ;D"

I really like you stories and style of writing. It makes me laugh so much. I love twincest and all kind of forbitten love, so this is really great. And by reading your profile I've discovered that you like exactly the same KH-pairings that I do (Larxel, MarVex, Zemyx, XemSai, RoxNam...), which is not very usual phenomenon for me. :)) hope you continue!

hell..make more..this is turning interesting..

omg you have to continue this

it's really addicting :)

This story is really good! ive been waiting for the updates forever! whens the next chapter gonna be up?

This is really deep, it's so angsty. I love it! I hope it doesn't turn out like most of the twin twin stories I've read... It's usually all so tragic! Update soon? The plot is amazingly addicting.

Wauw, very deep... I'm gonna read more of this story, when my last day at school's over ^^

this is descent

aww...thats sad :( owellz...the angst is a good idea, it adds to the story. i mean if they just got together happily, then...it'd be boring, so i like how you did that :] keep up the good work and update soon~!!