Aww I love Marauder friendship fics! This was really nicely written and you wrote the characters brilliantly! great job! :)

i love this story

its so sweet

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p.s i totaly agree with u the story THE NAME IS POTTER-BLACK! is awsome ]

Aw soo sweet & very awesome as well

ohmigosh! that was so sweet! I loved it, Siriusly. That was so sweet!

Good job. I especially liked this exchange:

"I'll forgive you Sirius, on two conditions." Remus stated.

"Anything." Sirius said, nodding.

"First promise me from now on you'll stop and think before you do something stupid."

Sirius nodded his head quickly in agreement.

"Second, promise me if you ever do anything stupid again, you won't complain when one of your friends clubs you over the head." Remus stated firmly.

One bit of construtive critisism though. There should always be two blank spaces at the end of every sentence. There is no space between most sentences here and it makes it hard on the eyes.

ow so sweet!

This was great. Congratulations. You gave me tears. Very good!