So I adore this ending and I am so happy that there is a third installment! I started reading the trilogy from the beginning the other day and am making my way through this one again and I am in love. This story has been so wonderful from beginning to end and I can't wait to read what happens next! You are simply a great writer who should never stop! (now off I go to read the newest story lol)

Bella and Tris had a boy, Edward. How sweet. Julienne is the one that will be having an adventure. And the further lives of Erik and Evie's family. Well done, thank you. On to the next story.

Wonderful-thanks for a sweet and funny epilogue! And for the tease on what happens to Julienne! I look forward to your next tale!

Love your explanation for the title at the end, very nice. The way Bella told the family she was pregnant was cool. The over all joy of the chapter, and the randiness of Erik and Evie discussed by their children, LOL...Very like the ughly truth or too much information for some of the kids. More please.

Sigh... Thanks for a lovely story-for the surprises revealed and the one (I suspect) that is to come. A great tale-I look forward to the Epi!

What a beautiful wedding-very emotional and I love the closeness of Charles/Tris-just right! And the sly wit of the newlyweds-cute! Thanks for a great chapter-looking forward to more!:)O

Lovely wedding and a beautiful bride. Lady Keating nearly was human. Erik balled! Unheard of. Cyprus for the honeymoon. Nice. More please.

My computers back! *jumps happily around
Their family trees are impressive. Prolific bunch of people you have there.

Emmy's tryout went well. Her parents had no idea she could sing that way. You had quite a look pass between Erik and Chrisitne. I see you had Charles and Emmy married a short while before hand she sang.

Bella and Tris's mother are getting along, but Tris is still leary of her. He plays the piano, how interesting.
What a turn you had Chloe life take. No wonder she acted so hateful, she had a horried life at home, making her jealous of others normal life. Emmy and Charles did the right things in helping her to escape. I could imagine Erik's rage when he went with the other men to her house. It must have taken all his will power to keep his temper at bay, let alone the other men and their tempers. More please.

That was a kind and forgiving thing Emmy and Charles did...poor Chloe! No wonder she's was a b...h! Thanks for the sweet way Tris paved the way to marry Bella sooner then later! And for the surprise Emmy was able to give her folks-nice! A great story-sniff! More please?:)

What a brave girl Bella is! I love how Tris saved her, and Erik's instructions on how to survive-lifesaving! But hearing him tell Bella how beautiful she is, then giving permission for Tris to stay with her...sigh. Perfect-thanks for a great rescue-and the promise of more!:)

Ah, as I thought after much deliberation yesterday. It took me a while to figure out that is was Frederic, but the jest of his story was as I imagined. I hadn't thought about him having an affair with Tris's mother. That was not something I thought about. LOL Bella did learn from her father, and escaped so Tris could find her, rescuing her from peril. What a sweet story Erik told her about her birth. She knows she is special. She reminds me of the ugly duckling that will grow into a beautiful swan. I look forward to the next chapter. More please.

This makes me want to go back and reread some of the party where Bella and Tris were together, to see if there are any clues as to who it was that took her. Poor Gustave, he thought he lost Claire right after finding her. Erik is a force that no once can stop no matter what the obstical. More please.

Liked the proposal. What a great way to present the ring. With Claire this had to be the way he did it. A way to capture her heart that was different than the norm. Not another mess with Tris. Someone wants him away from Bella. They have no idea what Erik will do when one of his daughters has been messed with. I fear this man will regret his actions. More please. (computer down on borrowed one)AGH!

That's horrible-but if anyone can find poor Belle-it's Erik! And I bet it's that horrible Butler-but where in Milan did he take Belle? I'm so glad Gustave and Raoul and Christine are there-great scene with his comforting Claire! Thanks for a mouse-turner-now what?:)

I have to say, that was one of the best chapters! it had everything! i am so excited to see what happens next! please update soon because I am very hooked on this story!