 Hasuko 2008-10-19 . chapter 1I liked Mariko's fairy tale. Very cute. ^^ The way the guys acted, all badgering Kiyomaro and up on his case, was very amusing. I can totally see it in an episode. I had a slight confusion about the chronology. Everything that actually happened, was it a flashback, or was it foreshadowing Mariko's story? (Well, I don't see how that can be if Gash gave her the details. XD) Nice work on the characterization and cute story overall. ^^ |