Wow. This story was pretty well-done although there were just a few mistakes. One was when you said Saki was male. "A very scary male that one shouldn't be messed with" shouldn't it have been "that one shouldn't mess with"? Just pointing that out. When Wolf chased Falco and "said things that is left" should be are, perhaps? Also afterwards, "That, that" was probably meant to be "At that". Other than that, good work

Yeah I thought this was something to do with the rankings -.- I hate it. It's all bullcrap!

But anyway yea...I liked this a lot 'twas awsum :D