Please update this! I love it!

A new chapter! *dancing around* I can't tell you how happy I am to be able to read the next chapter, the excitement nearly killed me.
And the idea with your summary of the last chapter was great, too, I was even more anxious to read what will happen.
I loved the beginning, by the way, from Lester's point of view. You told us the important fact, that is that Johnny is dead on Danny's heels, and you showed a bit of the 'real' world, where not everybody is used to burning skeletons. And you made me laugh, a talent you have mastered *g*. I just have to see that you've updated and I'm grinning like a madman. Oh god, I'm blabbering again instead of reviewing your chapter. I need to focus or else I'm still sitting here tomorrow^^
I just love the way you describe things like when Johnny chased his brother, it makes me feel as if I'm in the middle of it and that if I stop reading I will crash into a wall.
This review will be long because I write it while I read the chapter, so that I can comment on everything. *g*
Harley and Davidson. Well, what else can be expected? *grins* I wonder what part Danny will have in your story. Until now I like him but let's see what kind of a person he is. It seems that they are already bickering like brothers. I just say 'firecrotch' *grins*
I love these little jokes you make even in the gravest situations. I have to worry about Blackheart but I still have to laugh. CSI San Diablo *laughs* What a shame that we can't receive HellTV up here.
I'm glad that Mephisto will search for his son himself, because he is a match for the Wolf Brothers. And I fear that they will find Blackheart soon.
At least Beelzebub has finally found Johnny, so that he knows how grave the situation really is. He has to go back to hell immediately and find Blackheart. And I think it was a good idea to bring Carter and Danny, too. I like them and I'm sure they will help Johnny.
The Wolf Brothers are already on his trail. It's so exciting, how should I sleep this night?
The end of your chapter was great^^ Blackheart has to be in every chapter, even if he's just complaining to you that he wasn't *grins* I love such dialogues.
And good to know you've been banned from entering Heaven, too. *laughs* So we'll meet in Hell.
I'm glad you updated, this chapter could only be improved through a little Johnny/Blackheart scene, but that goes for every story I have ever read (Ghost Rider or not). I think I'm just too addicted.
Anyway, I hope you're well and not under as much stress as I am at the moment. And I hope you have a leash for this monster review, it bites *g*

Lester was way cool!

and great chapter Danny was awesome! Whipping your ghost into shape! ah, brotherly love for ya...

Run Johnny!! Run! go save Blackheart! i was so glad to get this update... but almost nothing happened and i am still salivating imagining what is going to happen!

I wanted to write a review for this much earlier, but every time I wanted to comment on something, another super cool thing came up, and I felt like a cat in a hot wheels racetrack.
The beginning couldn’t be better. Right in the middle of the story, and forcing the reader to keep going, just to find out what is going on. I was on the edge of my seat, reading as fast as I could, because everything seemed to go so fast, and I couldn’t wait to find out what was it all about!
“And with Mr Blackheart Blaze already nagging at his heels like a demented bitch, Johnny knew that if he were forced to endure the next eight months in wedlock, he was going to need to start drinking. Heavily.” You got the average marriage right there.
The fall from the stairs was so cartoonish! I mean, the whole fic seems to me like it could easily be made into a cartoon parody, but Blackheart’s fall from the stairs, I was laughing as I imagined him flailing his arms and falling down the stairs. And then the whole “OMG! He’s pregnant!” thing overworked my brain. Because I don’t usually like mpreg, but this was just perfect.
I loved your characterization of Blackheart, I love his character and appearance, but the way you’ve made him out to be so bratty and dumb is incredibly cute. And not just that, his desire for attention, his lust for power, admiration and respect even when he falls on his face over and over again really wins me over. Also, vegetarian!Blackheart. Wow, a vegetarian demonic prince of hell. “I’m going to kill myself. I mean it, Johnny. I’ll eat a whole goddamned cow and die a slow and painful death from Mad Cow Disease-“ I couldn’t stop laughing.
The thing with Griselda The Crusher. Awesome. Just Awesome. Female He-Man on steroids, this is an image that will be with me all my life.
I love Blackheart’s demonic/emo eyeliner. Swet.
And when Mephisto said that they weren’t married! I really thought they would get separated!
The fight at the coliseum was Epic. With capital E-P-I-C.
Also, the fact that you leave every chapter at a cliffhanger is great. You really know how to write a super exciting story. Like a thriller, where every scene stops at the most critical moment. You could be a very good thriller writer
“Panic! at the Babyshower” I must admit, I stared at that title for a couple moments, just…awed at it.
Although, I noticed something. In this part: “No he isn’t,” Blaze replied monotonously, not really listening. “He just proud of you and wants all of his friends to see you.” Isn’t it He’s just?
And here: “You don’t you care at all, do you?” exclaimed Blackheart angrily.
I think a you slipped by.
I’ll review the other chapters later, but I’ve already read them and can easily say they are made of awesome. I hope you update soon, I can’t wait to see what happens next!

I was really happy when I saw that a new chapter was on. The story is very tragic at the moment and if I could I would read it in one go.
Poor Blackheart, he really suffered a lot because of Johnny’s absence. And when Mephisto said he doesn’t even want to search for Johnny I could have hit him. At least Beelzebub has enough reason to know that Johnny would never leave Blackheart like that.
And the Hidden appear in this chapter, too. I like how you write about them, although they are quite mean to Blackheart. I hope that they will find Johnny soon. Three month is really a long time and it would be a shame if Johnny misses the birth of his son.
Blackheart is really depressed. Poor him, I can understand why he reacts like that. The scene in the kitchen shows that he can’t cope with Johnny’s disappearance. And he believes that he will die when he gives birth to his son. I very much believe that he won’t die but he believes it and that is really bad. Almost as bad as running away. He must be really confused and hurt.
And if that isn’t already bad enough, the Wolf Brothers are just waiting to get him. It’s all a great mess of things and I really hope that Johnny will come back soon and help Blackheart before something terrible happens.
As I said, everything is really tragic. But I still had to laugh then and there, for example when I imagined the look on Slade’s face when Johnny told him to whom he is married.
It was really a great chapter. I sat in front of my computer clutching the chair because I could feel Blackheart’s despair and Johnny’s longing and everything else nearly as strong as they felt it.
I can’t wait to read what is going to happen next

oh poor blackie...he's going nuts...at least beelz have some faith in Blaze...

great chapter!

Yes, I’m still alive and no, I haven’t forgotten you or your story. I’m really sorry that it took me so long to write you but I have been in a hospital for a little over two weeks. I’ve broken the joint of my right arm and that made it a little difficult to write. Not that I was able to go online in that stupid hospital but enough of that. Here comes your well earned review.
After chapter eight I sensed that a lot of trouble is waiting for Johnny. And especially after the clock was broken I feared that he may stay away from Blackheart a lot longer that intended. But I guess I should read this chapter before I jump to conclusions.
The first part of the chapter made me frown but I knew better that to be angry with Johnny. When I realised that it was Blackhearts imagination I was a lot more pleased, though now I feel sorry for him. I guess he will be hurt by whatever happens in this and the following chapters.
But it’s so sweet that he is worried and that because of that he’s running around in pyjamas. That shows that he feels lonely and wants to be warm and comfortable. And he would be like that in Johnny’s arms. I’m just at the beginning of the chapter and already I can’t stand that they are separated. I think my long stay in the hospital made me a bit more emotional than usual.
And he is definitely afraid of his own baby. Why else would he call it a parasite ? I don’t think he hates him that much he just can’t handle the situation. Just as expected of a pregnant male teenager. I’m sure he will change his opinion in time. The way he talks to his son sometimes shows that he feels more that he wants to.
Oh, and he’s ‘poisoning’ his child with his music *grins* That’s exactly the argument a friend of mine has with her boyfriend. And demons can neither act nor dance nor sing? Well, it seems I’m more like a demon that I thought *grins*.
And of course Johnny is in trouble again. As soon as he sets foot on earth there is always someone he’s in trouble with. That’s so like him. And it seems that they have beaten him up pretty bad. Poor Johnny, he’s right, why always in the face?
You’re giving me images again. An angel who looks like Danny DeVito? I would pay to see that *grins*
NOW I know why they lured him into a trap. They think he is Danny because Johnny, too, is a Ghost Rider. Well, I should have seen that coming but I was pretty slow with that one.
Johnny really has got no luck. It would have been better for him if heaven never would have known what happened to him. But of course the two ‘angels’ had to discover his fate while he wasn’t even able to run away. But if I were them I wouldn’t say mean things about Blackheart, who knows how Johnny will react?
“God’s son learned to walk on water when he was twelve” how do you come up with sentences like that? I would have never thought of it like that but it is definitely funny *grins*
Oh crap, how did they guess the whole thing that easily? I hope that it will not be too bad for Johnny and Blackheart that the angels have found out.
Well, Blackheart has really been rash in his decision. But at least he picked the right husband. I wonder what will happen to Johnny now.
Okay, who are the Wolf Brothers? I’m getting slightly worried. I hope they don’t dare to try and hurt Blackheart. Johnny would never let anything happen to him.
Well, Slade was a surprise. But I’m glad that at least he’s on Johnny’s side. I hope he can help him, perhaps even bring him back to his husband. He is needed there.
And now he has found out that Danny is his brother whom he should help, too. But how can he help both Blackheart and his brother at the same time? Does he even want to help his brother? But I knew, as long as he can prevent people from dying he would do it. But I’m glad that he decided to go back to Blackheart first, even if he didn’t do it. It shows that he’s worth more to him than everything on earth, even the last bit of family he has left.
I feel really sorry for Blackheart. He’s looking forward for Johnny to return after seven days and he will be so disappointed. He has really missed him.
‘Blacklung’… and they have really been trying? I’m glad that Blackheart was called BlackHEART and not some other organ like Blackliver or something *grins*
Poor Blackheart. He really thinks Johnny has left him. But I’m glad that Beelzebub hasn’t given up and that he will search for Johnny. I can imagine that Blackheart will be really miserable until Johnny returns. Poor guy, I hope they will be reunited soon. And I hope that the time difference between earth and nether-earth isn’t that big so that Blackheart won’t have to wait that long.
I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you’ve forgiven me for letting you wait that long.

W00T! This was totally win-in-a-can covered in awesome sauce! Slade's back, as an angel no less, and Beelzebub gets more epic every second. 'three diagnosed nervous disorders' ...that sounds a bit like me. He read breaking dawn? That's just award worthy. Sad to but, I'm more entertained with Bubba's character than the story XD But the story still rocks... and don't you ever doubt it!

aw! poor poor Blackheart! he must be crushed! Blaze should have gone back to let him know he wasn't leaving him! im glad the demon (beelz) realise that something must have happened to blaze...nd i do sincerely hope that the wolves dont hurt B and his baby!

Oh no! Blackheart is not going to be happy when he finds out about what happened to Johnny (*snickers*). As always, I will try to review as often as I can, whenever I can. ^_^

Yay! I'm glad you wrote another Ghost Rider fic! I thought it was kind of funny though because I was listening to Rob Zombie when I read the first chapter. I couldn't believe Blackheart had a Rob Zombie poster in his room!

Oh - my - goshness.

This is EPIC!

(Just in case you couldn't tell, I'm raiding you're fanfiction archive and devouring them. I might explode from their sugary goodness, but I don't care.)

Holy Sweet Mother of Icecream! This is Win in a Can covered in awesome sauce, my friend! I love this so much! You have no idea right now. I'm just so excited about the whole Danny Ketch part! And Mephistopheles managed to look somewhat ok this time, which is saying something when you're taking about Satan... ^-^

who the hell is danny ketch?