 Avadhani 1/15/02 . chapter 2Erm...I'm extremely perplexed...*shakes her head bewilderedly*...it was, erm, funny? To be quite honest though, I think it would be a lot more humorous if you cut down on the homosexual cracks-or at least portrayed 'em in a less degrading-mocking way, (I know, this probably does seem lame, but it's true *shrugs*), jokes are keul 'til they become extremely offensive...mmmkay? -b
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