|Reviews for Thunder Storm Within|
| newerher3 1/9/13 . chapter 1
very good for a first try. even tough i haven't posted any stories yet.
keep up the good work
| moonlightnight1 6/3/12 . chapter 1
| anonymous 6/7/11 . chapter 1
do you ever write about Broly and Goku?
| Xxsilver-dragonnessxX 5/25/10 . chapter 1
I liked this! It was a great one-shot!
| Lady-Indis 7/13/09 . chapter 1
This wasn't bad at all :) I quite liked it actually.
Thanks for a nice little one-shot!
| Kirsti-Lee 11/14/08 . chapter 1
Hehe, just might have to check out that longer edition of this story, because shortened it just leaves one wanting more! Extremely well written, you have a way of describing scenery and images that captures their elements perfectly. So on that note, i might just pop over to that other website!