very good for a first try. even tough i haven't posted any stories yet.
keep up the good work

good

awesome story

do you ever write about Broly and Goku?

I liked this! It was a great one-shot!

This wasn't bad at all :) I quite liked it actually.

Thanks for a nice little one-shot!

Hehe, just might have to check out that longer edition of this story, because shortened it just leaves one wanting more! Extremely well written, you have a way of describing scenery and images that captures their elements perfectly. So on that note, i might just pop over to that other website!