Oh man! I reviewed this whole thing with a long review and it got erased when I added the story to my favorites!

I commented up to the hilt!

I read about Math and Greek history because your fanfiction encouraged me to do so. I read about Thales http://w.mlahanas.de/Greeks/Thales.htm and all about Cyclic permutations. It made no sense to me but I took a bunch of notes!

Cyclic number.. a set of number with cyclic order that had successive multiples.. I think! Ah!

I loved this fanfiction!

A sudden rustle of clothing to make the wearer know has heard by Hurley to his left.

Did you mean: A sudden rustling of clothing made the wearer know he had heard Hurley to his left?

Jeremy Bentham's ghost was the best! I've never read such a thought provoking one-shot! Definitely not for dimwits like me! ( :

The line that started the whole feeling for this fanfiction in my mind was: He knew the short-sighted man couldn’t be blamed though, so every time he thought about laying all his troubles on the smaller man, he would remember that someone else had found the numbers before him, and someone before them. It was like an endless piece of string.

It gave so much feeling and mystery and provoked the reader to think about the past.

-Amy

This is great! Everyone was completely in character. Interesting Numbers therory (although i kinda skipped over the math, it confused me:)) This sounds very plausible as a situation Hurley might be in during that scene. I am totally floored and flattered that you'd like to work on a Ben and Alex story w/me! However, high school is kicking my a** so i don't think i would have time. I'm SO SORRY! So, u are or aren't done w/ "Fatherly Love"? It sounds like a "no" from your reply.

Keep writing!

E.D.-D.