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KissKickKillMe
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
AMGAMGAMG!
That...
That...
THAT...!
No, I can't describe it ;D
LOVE IT!<3
TopazEyesForever
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
Not many people could write a scene like this and do it with style and accuracy on the characters (Kinda, lol). Not only did you pull it off, but i enjoyed reading it, even though the angst factor was pretty high. (Which i like anyway, so whatever!) :)
riceballcrossidol
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
too good!1
scarlet witch extreme
2009-03-25 . chapter 1
Holy shimata, that was an amzing piece, you are truly a gifted writer and boy can u write yaoi, and boy love so well, it had me spinng and blushing like a virgin, this my first foray into vampire knight and geez u blew it straight into another stratosphere for me. The tension, the hurt, the rape and the domination sigh, i hope to joining the story writing soon and boy have u set the bar high..lol. I love your portrayals u have a way of painting such a beautiful picture that u could almost taste and touch the characters. You r brilliant.

Respect
Scarlet
deviline12.1
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
This is very good... There aren't many Kaname/Zero here, so it's always good to read this story.
morbiDreamscape
2009-03-20 . chapter 1
Painful, bleak, but oh so beautiful at the end. You did a great job of portraying the conflict within each of the characters. I especially liked how Yuuki was the perfect yin to the boys' yang, and how she brought a sense of warmth and peace to their previously individual torment. Excellent! Thanks for writing. ^_^
Night-Blaze
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
Love this fic. It's so powerful - Zero's despair, his pain, his lust and more animalistic side; Kaname's unwilling submission and discovery of what he actually wants in the end, Yuuki's love for the two of them and the potrayal that she's the glue that keeps them together.

There really is no words to describe your fic, it just blew me away. Would like to see more of this, it would be brilliant if you could continue this story, but it's okay if you can't. =)
NekoDoodle
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
^^ this was amazing to read. I find it funny how Kaname is almost a closet pervert.
Tasogare no Raikou
2009-02-18 . chapter 1
WOW. This is amazing. It's the first time I've read a Zero:x:Kaname, and even though it was a bit rape-ish it was still amazing, especially when Kaname finally started to enjoy it. Yuki hearing him calling out Zero's name was an awesome touch, and the part at the end where they meet hands in Zero's hair and Kaname's thinking how good it all feels... Threesomes. Yes yes. I have yet to read one of those either. This was so good! I'm so impressed. I write Kingdom Hearts fics (and a Loveless fic once that I never finished) but I adore Vampire Knight and might just have to try my hand at some VK yaoi! :P Thanks so much for the story, it was great.

-goes and looks at your other fics!
Miss DnG
2008-11-27 . chapter 1
ooh how very dark! Very interstingly written
Syeira
2008-10-30 . chapter 1
Wow, that was intense. And sexy. And intense! Wait, did I say sexy? Oh yeah, I did! And your style of writing...it's incredible! Please tell me you're trying to get published, or at least write for your school paper or something. Talent like yours should be spread around. This story was really brilliant. I especially liked Kaname's reaction when Yuki caught him. It was so in-character. Thanks for sharing.

~Syeira
MooseWoodson
2008-10-28 . chapter 1
WOW. Absolutely amazing. I just..love it! If only I could write fanfictions like this then all my friends would be sated. 100% great job!

I am definately favoriting this. Thanks for the great story!
Mosuke
2008-10-25 . chapter 1
Wow Kaname is a frickin saint compared to what others would have done!I like it!Nice snow comparision too.
(I know this was rather crappy but I just can't think of enough words to describe how good this was)
Mosuke
shinigamiami
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
T_T Kaname-sama was raped.. if Aido found out... i'd hate to see the consequences...

i liked the end with the snowflakes! each one unique and melding into a whole new thing more beuatiful.. ^_^ so the snowflakes are like people right?
Nineorchids
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
Wow! I loved the ending with the snowflake analogy. That was brilliant. The story was a little bit squicky in some places but you did warn us. Shudder. Even so, I never really thought Kaname was going to come to any real harm. Physical pain and domination/possession for a pureblood seem to be very different. I guess if you're practically immortal, with unlimited healing powers pain is fleeting and nothing to fear. As I was reading I was wondering how Kaname would manage to reconcile with the event afterwards but your explanation of his thought processes was totally plausable.

I'd love to see Kaname's explore his submissive side in a consensual way. Hm. Several plot bunnies just poked their tiny heads up.
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