Hmm, I like it.

I read some of the iriginal and you have clearky produce a superior strain this time around. Like myself you have learned that speedy development is overated, it takes time to raise a marvel.

With animations a lack of palpable losses tends to be one of my greatet complaints. Featuring wars where a bubble surrounds te main chracters is a diservice. But then again I am in the Martinite School of storytelling.

Kurosaki will have ample rage behind him in this venture, though I wonder how he will deal with what waits at the end of the road?

The smaller touches often bring a story to life I find. Aizen taking Tatsuki as a pet is both beautiful ad horrible as spectacular art tends to be. I wonder if this behavior will translate into her as an arrancar, as one reviewer pointed out the image of arrancar Tatsuki sitting by Aizen's throne. Furthermore in that event I could see some interesting interactions between her and Menoly/Loly, perhaps Tatsuki assuming control of Aizen's little fan club.

I confess the two lads are of little interest to me. Unlike Tatsuki they always struck me as space fillers never really contributing to the story.

Can you recomend any of other Hollowified Tatsuki tales.

I realy like this story and hope you update this soon. Especially since it won on your poll. I find it hilarious that Aizen is treating her like a dog, and think it would be amusing if he somewhat keeps that relationship with her even when she's an arrancar. I say somewhat because it would be wierd (in my opinion) if Aizen had her sit on her but at his side when she resembles a human, but hey that's just me. Any who like I said can't wait for the update and keep up the good work!

I like this fic very much but are you planning on continuing this?

dude love ur fic! i read the original and literally screamed and banged my head against the wall when u said u were rewriteing. but that may have been the sleep deprivision getting 2 me...but i really like it so far!! By the by, i really liked the whole 'lost memory then brain wash though torture' idea. to me it looks like thats what ur doing. am i right? bet i am! ;D Anyhoo UPDATE! haha i almost typed reveiw...Haa

you know if you really want to have tatsuki advance forms, you just need to have her eat a hollow of the next rank. it makes sense for the most part. love the story by the way.

C'mn, update already. Are u anbandoning this! Plz dont make tatsuki like the previous st0ry, I didnt 1ike her then

The story is great, update, I can't wait to read more. Sit a cap like 10 words a day then you'll be finished in no time. Tatsuki is the best. Don't make her completely evil. Let her be conflicting with herself but eventually become good

Interesting. Decent writing, and an interesting idea. Keep writing, I like it.

yes this is great. i have wanted to see hollowification updates for sometime now. i had almost given up. now at least the bleach chapters have progressed you have more material to work with. like ichigo's super hollow form and things like that.

since hollowification got more votes and the most votes will you work on that first. does it have senority on legion of shadows since it got more votes? just asking.

i have this favorited but now i'm suscribing to you as a author.

Well it's certainly a bit different from the original in terms of how they became hollows. But we still haven't seen them in their Arrancar forms and what their personalities are like. So I'll await that. Update soon.

I'm reading about the story, but I'm not reading THE story. post new chpaters not your satupid poll results. do on your forum page. STORY NOW. your crappy author notes are pissing me off. update the F%*$#@%& stry already

I read a bit of the first and liked it. I read this one and loved it. You got Tatsuki's charecter spot on and im glad you did some imginative deaths for Keigo and Mizuiro.

Keep it up, cant wait till next chapter.

Okay, I have to tell you, I love this story.

Keigo, Mizu, and Tatsuki don't get enough love. And while the writing isn't the best, and there's several rough spots grammarwise, it's a very creative idea and I'm intrigued enough to see it through.

I also really like how it follows the canon line, yet is also a shameless AU. Most AU stories are completely spilt off, it takes skill to manage partial ones. Kudos for that...

Anyway, keep up the good work! ^_^ Hopefully the next chapters(I'm only on chap 2) will be just as great.

--WK

I think this will be much better.

Hey can't wait to see whats in store for the upcoming chapter so keep up the good work and upate qwhen ya can definately looking foward to it XD!