That was spooky . . . Very well written, though, but highly chilling . . . It was awesome!

It was realy good at the beginning but I felt like you rushed it at the end-3/1 stars

so so

Whoa, that was creepy! Really good but, creepy!

Evil Butler.

o.O awesome story...i guess your not gunna carry on but maybe you couls space it out a bit more, it would attract a bit more attention...as well as a bit more description but it was cool XD