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Reviews for: Invisible Man
Crow T R0bot
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
Whoops, another accidental favoriting. I don't think I'll ever get the hang of this new review system. Even so, for all it's shortness, this was a surprisingly good read.

Was the "Lady Doctor" Otacon was talking about Naomi by any chance? I don't think you were clear on that.

Overall, however, I don't find it totally out-of-character that Otacon would use his stealth suit to hide in the woman's bathroom (though a locker or shower room would have likely yielded better results). Too bad for him he never stood a chance.

I'm embarassed to admit it, but I really do ship Wolf/Otacon, even though it was 90 percent certain to be one-sided in-story.

I bet Otacon feels jealous that Snake managed to succeed where he failed, hooking up with someone in the ladies' room. ^_^
SeikoTuNeR
2008-10-20 . chapter 1
Hah. Great little insight to a 'what if' moment in MGS.
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